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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 2 0 年前

請幫我翻譯一篇心得....拜託<10點>

今年ㄉ春假我和我ㄉ家人一起ㄑ日本旅遊,這是ㄍ很好ㄉ機會,可以增進家人ㄉ感情

我們ㄑㄌ很多東京有趣ㄉ地方,例如世界聞名ㄉ迪士尼樂園,讓我真ㄉ大開眼界,還有東京ㄉ商品,多到數不完...另外日本ㄉ溫泉和窗外ㄉ富士山美景更是讓我難忘,但是最讓我印象深刻ㄉ是用溫泉水煮出來ㄉ黑色溫泉蛋,看起來沒什ㄇ,口感卻是一級棒

這是寒假作業,所以希望不要錯誤太多....謝謝 ^^"

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  • nancy
    Lv 6
    2 0 年前
    最佳解答

    I go to Japan to travel with my family on spring vacation of this year, this is a very good chance, can promote family's emotion .

    We have gone to a lot of interesting places of Tokyo, such as world-famous Disneyland, let me really broaden horizon, it can not finished counting that the goods with Tokyo, arrive more ...Make me unforgettable especially in the hot spring of Japan and beautiful scenery of Fuji outside window in addition, but it was the black colour temperature spring egg that is poached out with the hot spring that made me with deep impression most, seem not to matter, but mouthfeel is that one grade is excellent.

    PS. 請不要打注音文 還樣幫你改成中文很累的

    另外作業要自己寫吧!!

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  • 匿名使用者
    4 年前

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    每到放假的季節

    就會想去旅遊放鬆

    但要如何完整規劃自己的行程呢?

    今年的暑假我就有規劃要去峇離島

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  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    會說要幫他改成中文代表一定是用翻譯軟體吧 呵呵

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  • 2 0 年前

    During the Spring Festival this year, we took a family trip to Japan, which I thought of being a suitable time for promoting the family affection.

    We visited various interesting places in Tokyo, such as the world-famous Disneyland surprisingly broadening my horizon, a large variety of goods fully occupying my sight, and so on. In addition, the Japanese hot spring and the beautiful Mt Fuji scenery outside the window were memorable even more, where the most impressive was the black eggs boiled by hot spring water, looking ordinary but tasting great.

    文章中, 我有用到 where 代表同一個地方, 我推測發問者應該在同一個地方洗溫泉. 看美景. 吃蛋.

    發問者小瑜, 我翻譯的文章僅供參考, 照抄的話, 老師會懷疑

    謝謝 ^-^

    參考資料: 語言考試難考的我
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  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    我認為maomee寫得最好又最正確.贊成樓上混雪兒說的,前三個錯誤太多了!

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  • 2 0 年前

    文法錯誤一大堆上面那三個

    2005-02-10 05:54:35 補充:

    My family and I went to Japan for this year's spring break. This is a good chance for us to promote our family affiliation. We have been to many interesting place in Tokyo, such as the world-famous Tokyo Disneyland, shopping centers, and etc. Also, the Japanese hot spring and the beautiful scenery of Fuji Mountain from the window view were so unforgettable to me. However, the most impressive and memorable experience was the hot black-spring egg cooked using the hot spring water. Its appearance was very common, but its taste was very delicious.

    基本上你用中文寫時語句就已經寫得不是很流暢了.

    翻成英文時~還得先修一下呢!

    還有寫英文作文時, 不是說一個字一個字翻過來就成了

    也要注意一下通用詞與慣用的句子

    前面那三個翻譯唸起來不但文法錯誤很多, 用句與說法更是不通

    P.S. 春假 (Spring break)

    寒假和暑假才會用vacation

    原因:vacation 比較長阿

    (sorry vacation 剛剛不小心拼錯了><)

    還有是 Fuji Mountain沒錯

    Mountain是用在後面的

    用在前面的是Mount

    Mount Fuji

    2005-02-10 07:51:28 補充:

    maomee 寫得真的很棒~不過還是有一點文法錯誤.

    參考資料: 殺殺殺...ccc...
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  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    ***以下翻譯有正確的用字,時態和文法,希望對你有實質的幫助***

    I went to Japan to travel with my family during this spring vacation. It was a very good chance to enhance my family's attachment.

    We have been to a lot of interesting places in Tokyo, such as world-famous Disneyland,which really broadened my horizon. It was also uncountable with the goods in Tokyo. Besides,the hot spring of Japan and beautiful scenery of Fuji mountain outside the window especially made me unforgettable. However, what most impressed me was the black hot-spring eggs poached by the hot spring water. They looked nothing special, but the taste was first-class excellent.

    參考資料: myself with TOEIC grades 805
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  • 2 0 年前

    推一樓的

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  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    今年的春假我和我ㄉ家人一起去日本旅遊,這是個很好的機會,可以增進家人的感情。

    The spring vacation of this year I with my family go to Japanese tour together,this is a good chance to promote the family's affection.

    我們去了很多東京有趣的地方,例如世界聞名的迪士尼樂園,讓我真的大開眼界,還有東京的商品,多到數不完...另外日本溫泉和窗外的富士山美景更是讓我難忘,但是最讓我印象深刻的是用溫泉水煮出來的黑色溫泉蛋,看起來沒什麼,口感卻是一級棒。

    We went to a lot of places with interesting Tokyos, for example the world is known for of Disney paradise , let me open new vista really and greatly,also have the merchandise of Tokyo,go to much out of count...Besides the Japanese hot springs and the Fuji out of the window mountain lovely view are to make me difficult to forget,but make my impression deep most is the black hot springs egg that cooks out with the hot springs water,look the nothing,but the eating is one class stick.

    參考資料: 饅頭妹^^
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  • 2 0 年前

    The spring vacation of this year I go to Japanese tour with my family together,this is a good chance,can promote the family's affection

    We went to a lot of places with interesting Tokyos,for example the world is known for of Disney paradise,let me open new vista really and greatly,also have the merchandise of Tokyo,go to much out of count...Besides the Japanese hot springs and the Fuji out of the window mountain lovely view are to make me difficult to forget,but make my impression deep most is the black hot springs egg that cooks out with the hot springs water,look the nothing,but the eating is one class stick

    PS你的"的"用太多了

    應該在刪些墜字

    參考資料: 另依種翻譯法
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