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一段中翻英的故事~

這是我下禮拜想要講給遠親的小朋友聽的~可以麻煩英文高手幫幫我嗎?

讓小朋友淺顯易懂的~不要太深澳的文法~謝謝您們呢

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從前在大海裡有一座城堡 ,

許多人魚們正在舉辦一個替公主(美人魚)慶生的派對 ,

慶生結束後 , 公主游到海面上看見一艘華麗的輪船上有個帥氣的王子 ,

這個時候突然一陣大風雨把輪船吹翻了 ,

公主立刻把王子救到岸邊 ,

正當王子醒後 , 公主害怕王子知道她不是人類 ,

於是就躲起來 , 王子一直都不知道救他的就是公主 ,

公主非常傷心於是到邪惡的巫婆那 ,

請求巫婆讓她變成人類 , 巫婆就說 : 用妳的聲音跟我交換吧 !

公主答應了 , 她變成人類後 ,想辦法進入皇宮陪在王子身邊 ,

並且天天跳舞給他看 ,

有一天 , 王子要舉辦婚禮了 , 但要娶的那個人卻不是公主 ,

公主非常非常的傷心 ,

於是隔天變成了一堆泡沫 , 沉入大海了 .

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Formerly had a castle in the sea, many manatees were conducting (beautiful manatee) to celebrate the fresh faction for princess to, after celebrated lives had ended, princess swam to the sea level in sees on a magnificent steamboat to have the prince which a commander-in-chief was mad, this time suddenly driving rain blew over the steamboat turned, princess rescues immediately the prince the shore, after while the prince awoke, princess was afraid the prince to know she is not the humanity, thereupon hid, the prince continuously all did not know rescued him is princess, princess is extremely sad thereupon to evil sorceress that, Requested the sorceress lets her turn the humanity, the sorceress said: With 妳 the sound exchanges with me! Princess complied, after she turns the humanity, tries to find solution to enter the imperial palace to accompany in the prince side, and dances daily to him looked, one day, the prince had to hold the wedding ceremony, but had to marry that person actually was not princess, princess the extremely sadness, thereupon previous day turned pile of froths, sank to the sea.

  • 1 0 年前

    從前在大海裡有一座城堡 ,Once upon a time, there is a castle in the ocean.許多人魚們正在舉辦一個替公主(美人魚)慶生的派對 , Many mermaids were raising a birthday party for their princess.慶生結束後 , 公主游到海面上看見一艘華麗的輪船上有個帥氣的王子 ,After the birthday party, the princess swam to the sea surface and saw a hundsome prince on a magnificent boat.這個時候突然一陣大風雨把輪船吹翻了 , In the mean time, a strong wind blew the boat sank.  公主立刻把王子救到岸邊 , The princess immediately rescued the prince to the shore.  正當王子醒後 , 公主害怕王子知道她不是人類 , As the prince was about to wake up, she hided as the princess was afraid that the prince would realize she is a mermaid.於是就躲起來 , 王子一直都不知道救他的就是公主 , The prince never knew the princess saved him.公主非常傷心於是到邪惡的巫婆那 , The princess sadly asked an evil witch to let her turn into a human.請求巫婆讓她變成人類 , 巫婆就說 : 用妳的聲音跟我交換吧 ! The witch replied: "You shall exchange with your voice."公主答應了 , 她變成人類後 ,想辦法進入皇宮陪在王子身邊 , The princess agreed.  She entered the palace stayed by the prince after she turned into human.並且天天跳舞給他看 , She danced everyday to the prince.有一天 , 王子要舉辦婚禮了 , 但要娶的那個人卻不是公主 , One day, the prince got married but the bride was not the princess.公主非常非常的傷心 , The princess was suffering and soding.於是隔天變成了一堆泡沫 , 沉入大海了 . She turned into bubble and sank into the sea next day.講故事要用過去式,因為所有的事情都已經發生過了。另外在講故事的一開始講到"很久很久以前"的時候,英文叫once upon a time。什麼long time ago是比較白話用的,童話故事書的開場白不會這麼講。

    參考資料: 發現Yahoo知識+的英文版過了好久還是老樣子的我
  • 1 0 年前

    There was a castle in the sea in the past,

    A lot of mermaids are holding a party of celebrating one's birthday for princess (seamaid ),

    After celebrating one's birthday, the princess swims over to the sea surface and sees the prince with a dashing on a magnificent steamer ,

    Suddenly a gust of driving rain blew the steamer to turn over at this time,

    The princess rescues the prince to the bank at once,

    After the proper prince wakes up, the princess fears that the prince knows that she is not the mankind,

    Then hide from, the prince has not been knowing all the time what rescued him is the princess,

    That that then reaches the evil witch that the princess is very sad,

    Asking witches to let her become the mankind, the witch says: Exchange with me with your voice!

    The princess has promised, after she becomes the mankind, try every possible means to enter the imperial palace to accompany at prince's side,

    And it dances for him to see on day,

    One day, the prince will hold the wedding, but that person to be married is not a princess ,

    The princess is extraordinary and sad,

    Then turned into a pile of foams every other day, has sunk to the sea.

    參考資料:
  • 1 0 年前

    Long time ago...

    There was a castle under the sea.

    Mermen and mermaids was holding a birthday party for their princess

    The princess swam to the offing and saw a beautiful shiny ship after the party.

    And on that ship, she saw a handsome prince.

    At this time, fierce wind and rain blew and turned the ship over .

    Princess saved prince at once.

    She drew him to a beach.

    Princess was so afraid that prince know she's no human.

    So she hidden while princes awake.

    Prince didn't know who saved him.

    Sad princess went to evil witch, she begged evil witch turn her into human.

    The witch said,"Then you should exchange with your beautiful voice."

    "Yes, I will.", princess answered.

    She tried everything to be there with prince after she's human.

    And she danced for him everyday.

    But one day, prince would have a wedding with someone else.

    That breaked princess' heart.

    She finally changed into bubbles and sank into the sea.

    The end~

    2005-05-04 15:21:54 補充:

    如果有小朋友的年齡會更好喔...

    可以針對年齡編故事

    2005-05-06 15:21:26 補充:

    基本上小朋友的故事書once upon a time/long time ago兩種用法都相當常見,只是要看針對的是哪個年齡成的兒童罷了

    參考資料: 自身學淺
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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    Once upon a time, there was a castle in the sea. (under the deep ocean)It was the day that everyone in the castle were celebrating the Princess Mermaid's birthday. After the birthday party, the Princess Mermaid swam upon the sea and saw the handsome Prince standing on the deck of a marvelous ship.

    All of a sudden, a strong wind blew and the ship was turned down. The Prince fell into the sea and the Princess Mermaid rescued him right away to the seashore.

    The little mermaid was not sure if the Prince would be scared by the look of how the mermaid was or not, so she hid away when the Prince woke up. Therefore, the Prince had no idea that who rescued him after all.

    The little mermaid was so sad, and she went to the witch's, asking to change her into a human being.

    The witch said, "Ok, I will make you a human being, but I need your voice as an exchange."

    The Princess Mermaid agreed, and turned into a pretty girl.

    After she became a human being, she tried to get close to the Prince in the palace, and danced for him everyday.

    One day, the Prince is getting married, but he was not going to marry the little mermaid.

    The little mermaid was very very sad, and she became bubbles, sinking under the deep sea the next day.

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    2005-05-04 22:02:49 補充:

    oldsoup --- 既然要用過去式, 為什麼您用"there is a castle in the ocean"??????

    2005-05-11 14:27:49 補充:

    看吧 最高票又是第一個 而且還是翻譯軟體出來的 唉...

    參考資料: me me
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