When I was a child, my ambition was to be a boss, so I can make a lot of money.
To become a boss, I wanted to be a fashion designer, which is a wonderful job that symbolizes popularity and beautiful. Of course, I am also born with a talent in aesthetic and imagination. So I have the hunch strongly that I could be a good fashion designer.
However, time flies. As I grow up, I realize that I am not patience enough and not ability enough to play a good role, which has made me give up the ambition of being a fashion designer. Now I want to be a chairman like Coco Chanel. There are two reasons. First, I can ear more money. The other reason is that my company will be a well-known and international brand. It is a luxury and sumptuous job, which requires discernment, racy and characteristic.
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when i was.... so [so that] i can [could] 同一句話用同一時態
boss老闆 fasion designer 設計師 那你是想自己開店當設計師嗎
then you can say [when i was a child, i wanted to be a fashion designer to make lots of money]把兩句合併 你題目要找文章的錯誤 兩句是沒錯可是看的複雜
popularity is a noun and beautiful is adj.
... symbolizes [popularity and beauty]設計這行業是代表流行與美麗 是你要講的ㄇ
[i was born...art and...] aesthetic is adj.
i have...i could 如果這段是用過去是全部用過去式
however, time flies... don't put timeflies just However, as i grow up, ..i am not [patient] what do u mean by ability what kind ability
..,which [that] 用that 把逗號去掉 that makes me give up....
there are two reason: .... ear [earn]