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KC 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 2 0 年前

英翻中的改錯------回報十點

拜託各位的幫忙,校正下列文章的錯誤!In the organization or the company, although digital signature can verify the integrality of the document , which tells us whether the document has been altered or not. However, in our opinion, more functions can be added on it. In this way, it will become more fit in with the diversity as well as the demand of nowadays society.  We have compared digital signatures and digital watermarks, find though it is similar between both, but there are still valuable characteristics. Especially when we add digital watermark with digital signature ,there are a lot of advantages: fault tolerance and storage method .At the same time, we pay attention to common organizations or companies, work in a hierarchical style. Typical documents are forwarded either in a one-to-one format or being manually matched, not in a one-to-many format or in parallel.  That's the reason why manpower and supplies are wasted. If we used “watermarking protocol” and “transaction watermark” with “multiple purpose watermarks”, we can enhance the security of digital documents and the work in parallel , even more promotes the efficiency of forwarding digital documents. Our scheme proposes an appropriate multiple functional watermarks in parallel fashion to deal with digital documents in a hierarchical organization and track the flow of digital documents.

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不是英翻中,而是上述的英文(是中文翻過來英文的,請各位校正裡面不好或不適當的用法,辛苦各位

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裡面的watermark,digital watermark,digital signature,watermarking protocol,transaction watermark,mutilple purpose watermarks,這些是專有名詞

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  • 2 0 年前
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    原文In the organization or the company, although digital signature can verify the integrality of the document , which tells us whether the document has been altered or not. However, in our opinion, more functions can be added on it.

    修正後Although in the organization of the company digital signature can verify the integrality of the document by telling us whether the document has been altered or not, in our opinion, more functions can be added to it.

    原文In this way, it will become more fit in with the diversity as well as the demand of nowadays society. We have compared digital signatures and digital watermarks, find though it is similar between both, but there are still valuable characteristics.

    修正後By doing so, it will suit the diversity as well as meet the demand of the current society. We have compared digital signatures and digital watermarks and found that although there are similarities between the two, there are still valuable (你是要說有價值(valuable)的嗎?? 還是說有差別 (varying)?? ) characteristics.

    原文Especially when we add digital watermark with digital signature ,there are a lot of advantages: fault tolerance and storage method .At the same time, we pay attention to common organizations or companies, work in a hierarchical style.

    修正後There are a lot of advantages, such as fault tolerance and storage method, especially when we add digital watermark with digital signature. At the same time, we pay some attention to common organizations or companies, which work in a hierarchical style.

    原文Typical documents are forwarded either in a one-to-one format or being manually matched, not in a one-to-many format or in parallel. That's the reason why manpower and supplies are wasted. If we used “watermarking protocol” and “transaction watermark” with “multiple purpose watermarks”, we can enhance the security of digital documents and the work in parallel , even more promotes the efficiency of forwarding digital documents.

    修正後Typical documents are not forwarded in a one-to-many or parallel format but either in a one-to-one format or being manually matched. This is the reason why man power and supplies are wasted. If we use “watermarking protocol” and “transaction watermark” with “multiple purpose watermarks”, we can not only enhance the security of digital documents and the work in parallel but also promote the efficiency of forwarding digital documents.

    原文Our scheme proposes an appropriate multiple functional watermarks in parallel fashion to deal with digital documents in a hierarchical organization and track the flow of digital documents.

    修正後Our scheme proposes an appropriate multi-functional watermark in parallel fashion in order to deal with digital documents in a hierarchical organization and track the flow of digital documents.

    我盡力了.....有不好的地方請多指教啦

    參考資料: 我的笨腦袋
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  • KC
    Lv 7
    2 0 年前

    也謝謝你們的意見

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  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    你最好也要貼中文,不然不知道你要講什麼,基本上有幾個錯誤: 1 標點符號空格用法 2. though 跟 but 不可出現在同一句

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  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    In the organization or the company, although digital signature can verify the integrality of the document , which tells us whether the document has been altered or not.

    在幫會或這公司,雖然數字的簽字能證實這不可缺的這文件,哪個告訴我們是否這文件曾經盛極一時變或不.

    However, in our opinion, more functions can be added on it.

    然而,在我們的意見,更多功能有可能是廣告在它.

    In this way, it will become more fit in with the diversity as well as the demand of nowadays society.

    這麼來,它將成為更多使適合和多樣化如同這要求的當今社會.

    We have compared digital signatures and digital watermarks, find though it is similar between both, but there are still valuable characteristics.

    我們有比較數字的簽字和數字的水位標,找尋雖然他是類似between 兩者,但是在那裡是還貴重的特性.

    Especially when we add digital watermark with digital signature ,there are lot of advantages: fault tolerance and storage method .At the same time, we pay attention to common organizations or companies, work in a hierarchical style.

    特別是什麼時候我們把數字的水位標和數字的簽字,在那裡是大量的優越:缺點寬容和貯藏方法.同時,我們注意加入普通的幫會或公司,工作在一階級制度風格.

    Typical documents are forwarded either in a one-to-one format or being manually matched, not in a one-to-many format or in parallel.

    典型的文件是向前二者之一在一一對一格式或生存用手地火柴(比賽),不在一流的-到-許多格式或並聯.

    That's the reason why manpower and supplies are wasted.

    那個的理由為什麼人力資源和供給是浪費.

    If we used “watermarking protocol” and “transaction watermark” with “multiple purpose watermarks”, we can enhance the security of digital documents and the work in parallel , even more promotes the efficiency of forwarding digital documents.

    假如我們慣於“水位標議定書”和“辦理水位標”和“多重目的水位標” ,我們能提高安全的數字的文件和這工作並聯,更加推銷這效率的向前數字的文件.

    Our scheme proposes an appropriate multiple functional watermarks in parallel fashion to deal with digital documents in a hierarchical organization and track the flow of digital documents.

    我們的計劃提議適當多重功能上水位標並聯流行時尚討論數字的文件在一等級組織和蹤跡這流動的數字的文件.

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    2 0 年前
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