家慶 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 2 0 年前

尋找英文高手.幫我檢查一下

這裡有沒有英文高手幫我檢查哪裡有寫錯的地方,或者幫我修改成更通順的句子,謝謝.....PS.不用翻譯

My Favorite Place In Taiwan

My favorite place in Taiwan is Hualien, because the Hualien are filled with the very beautiful landscape everywhere, the east is limitless ocean, the west is a magnificent mountain range .At Taroko , you can see the towering crag in front of you, various rare conservation animals go back and forth by the side of you .Are all jade-green trees everywhere, the pure river that sees the bottom flows through the whole Hualien, creating the treasure ground of paying this beauty .The people of the Hualien are very warm, nearby neighbors all can help each other, and hardly see quarrel.

But, the Hualien of today, will not be so beautiful, because others parts of country are entering continuously to develop this place. They are breaking here the originally possessed beautiful scenery so the person in our Hualien has to stand out to protect this land together

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  • 2 0 年前
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    My Favorite Place In Taiwan

    My favorite place in Taiwan is Hualien because there are filled with many beautiful landscapes. On the east side is a limitless ocean, and the other side is a magnificent mountain range. At Taroko, you can see not only the towering crag in front of you but also a wide variety of rare animals run back and forth around you. With the pure river from the bottom flowing through the whole mountainside of Hualien, there grows jade-green trees which vitalize this natural treasury. The people there are very warm-hearted as if all the neighbors can help each other and never argue.

    However, because of increasing migrants who want to develop this dreamland, Hualien is not as beautiful as it was recently. Today, they keep breaking the original scenery of beauty. Thus, the Hualiens gather to protect their country.

    2005-06-09 00:39:35 補充:

    你要多注意你的文法唷

    有的句子不通順...我想你原本的構想應該是很棒的,在寫成英文時出了一點點問題,雖然可以理解你想要表達的意思,不過稍微有一點點吃力...

    :) 算是不錯了~加油唷

    2005-06-10 18:07:10 補充:

    其實我也蠻懷疑的~

    第二句你打對了,我沒有注意到我重複了動詞

    真害羞~

    參考資料: 我翻了很久的結果,我改掉了很多...不是用翻譯軟體
  • Dana
    Lv 4
    2 0 年前

    sutiph 我個人淺見啦 也許是我太無聊了

    覺得是 because there are many... 或是 because it is filled with many...

    然後好像是 running back and forth 耶

    看看就好啦

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