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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 2 0 年前

急~~急~~~~幫忙修改一下

Dear diary

July 12,2005

Today is as hot as usual.Fortunatly,we didn’t have outdoor activities.I had performance class in the morning,and translation course after lunch.The professor taught us the technique to trainslate and the difference between translation and oral trainslation.What a difficult occupation it is!I admired the simultaneous interpreters for their ability.I thought the most boring one is Phonetics.Alough the professor was very good,but I felt sleepy.In order tointroduce to us what they are learing in college and Shakespeare,so they showed us the movie” Shakespeare In Love”.After watching it,I understood Shakespeare little by little.

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  • Phoebe
    Lv 5
    2 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Today is as hot as usual.

    --> Today was as hot as usual.

    Fortunatly,we didn’t have outdoor activities.

    I had performance class in the morning,and translation course after lunch.

    --> I had a performance class in the morning and a traslation one after lunch.

    The professor taught us the technique to trainslate and the difference between translation and oral trainslation.

    --> The professor taught us some skills of translating and ~

    What a difficult occupation it is!

    --> What a challenging occupation it is!

    I admired the simultaneous interpreters for their ability. I thought the most boring one is Phonetics.

    Alough the professor was very good,but I felt sleepy.

    --> Although the lecture was very good, I felt sleepy.

    In order to introduce to us what they are learing in college and Shakespeare,so they showed us the movie” Shakespeare In Love".

    --> In order to show us what the students in department of forien languages learn and who Shakespeare is, the teacher let us to see the move "Shakespeare In Love" in class.

    After watching it,I understood Shakespeare little by little.

    --> Seeing the movie, I knew Shakespeare gradually.

  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

    我一直都有過敏狀況,是最近才知道要用防螨寢具的,因為醫師建議我用,我也考慮了很久,想說要買就買最好的,上個月趁網站有折扣的時候買了一組【北之特】防蹣(螨)寢具來用用看,真沒想到~~現在覺得過敏狀況有改善多了。雖然比一般的貴一些,不過~真值得!

  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    meowwwwww revised it very well.

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