One impressive travel/trip..15

One impressive travel/trip

這是上台介紹的題目之一,因為時間的不足,加上還要背誦,

所以來請高手及有心的好人來幫個忙吧…先說聲感謝

所以請試著以自已的口氣及立場來寫,讓我做做參考吧!

大約15-20句,這樣應該夠我唸個兩分鐘了啦!

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謝謝意見,讓我知道他在耍人,

唉…不知他的心態是什麼?

這麼好寫的題目竟搞成這樣子…

這樣我一定不會選他的,寧願十五點都不要了…

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SuperJim 如此的惡意,想我會把點數給他嗎?

當然絕對不會的,我只是想看看到底有沒有其他人見義勇為的來寫而已,我就給把點數給下去

只不過多謝這惡意的教訓喔!這作文真的很簡單也很好寫,我自已也有寫,早就打好了,只不過差在好壞而已

這對我是很正式的一件事,七個上台介紹的題目順利完成了,當然都是我自已寫的...

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這是我自已親手寫的作文,不好意思讓大家見笑了喔

Traveling is my favorite activity. Nothing in the world can not compare with traveling around. In my special experience, I went to a trip to the eastern Taiwan by myself. It was the first time that I left my hometown alone to a far away place.

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Contrary to my hometown, it is a small country, where is famous for its magnificent scenery. The view is so beautiful that I swam outside, took spa, and enjoyed myself very much. I had a good time in traveling at the eastern Taiwan.

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In a word, if I have once more opportunities, I will make a point of sightseeing it again.

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原來如此,我懂了!為什麼大家都沒來幫我的真正原因了,我真的只是想參考而已說...哈哈

要不是有個人提供意見說可以來知識發問,找人幫我忙,用點數一定有人會提供你參考的文章...

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SuperJim要不要來再寫一篇啊?我等著看就是了

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原本認為SuperJim是很有英文能力卻愛來整人搞怪的...

原來是場誤解,多謝幫忙修改文章,現在對你又改觀了

也讓我發現自己無心的小錯誤了,在此致上敬禮(<v_v)

而那位老師寫的也不錯,很有句型架構,但不知為何第二篇的標點符號卻很不清楚= =?不過真的很感謝了~~~

但我覺得兩個人自已寫的作品好像有點離題了,不知道是從travel/trip的定義延深出來的嗎?

也很難決定選那個人好?所以決定要讓各位來評選啦!

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SuperJim要不要再來拿20點x2呢?請去下面那個網址看http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/?qid=120508...

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    身為老師,給你兩篇供參考: 最好不要照抄

    {1}The taxi ride I shall never forget is the one I experienced a long time ago when I was only six years old. One summer evening I felt a little unwell and had a headache. Instead of letting this be known to my parents, I went to sleep. It was not until my mother awoke me that I found myself really ill. Mother felt my forehead and exclaimed, “Ron’s running a temperature again!” Immediately father called a taxi to rush us to a hospital. In those days the local taxis were generally not air-conditioned; besides, it was a hot day. I felt very ill with a high temperature inside the stuffy taxi, but I did not cry because I was too weak to do that. The taxi driver was speeding, yet tome it was still a long and slow journey, Finally we arrived at the hospital. I can’t remember what happened later. All I can remember is that I had a terrible headache that day. I am now no’ longer so easily taken ill al I used to be, but I shall never forget that taxi ride in my life.

    {2}Nothing has impressed me so much as the taxi ride I had about two years ago One night on my way home I lost control of my motorbike and got badly hurt when I was hurtled to the ground As I came to I found myself lying on the road with blood all over my body since it was in the dead of night there was not a soul around except some cars passing occasionally so I halloed to the cars while they were approaching The drivers however simply turned a deaf ear to my cry for help It was when I was about to give up that a taxi suddenly pulled up beside to my cry for help It was when I was about to give up that a taxi suddenly pulled up beside me. The taxi driver got off and came to my rescue. He drove me to a hospital as fast as he could. And I lost my consciousness against until a doctor was putting cast on my leg. When I woke up a smiling young man came to ask me how I was feeling and then something about my address and telephone number. And what happened next, as I can remember, was the arriving of my parents, their complaints about my carelessness, and many thanks, of course, to the driver. But the fact that I neglected to ask his name make me sick everytime I thought of this negligence. Yet, isn’t it a memorable experience about a taxi ride?

    2005-08-14 22:57:58 補充:

    第二篇旖旎的功力應該沒問題 看得懂吧~

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    SuperJim太過分了吧!!

    沒事花時間打這種害人的文章幹麻!

    要吃屎你自己去吃!

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    林旺, don't use SuperJim's piece. He is mocking you. In case you don't understand, let me put it in simple terms - he wants you to tell people that you ate your own shit!

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  • Jim
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    1 0 年前

    Traveling is my favorite activity. Nothing in the world can compare with traveling around. I had a special experience that I took a trip to the eastern Taiwan by myself. It was the first time that I've traveled away from my hometown alone to a far away place. Because the train system in Taiwan is very well established, I took the train to eastern Taiwan.  It only took approximately two hours to get there.Contrary to my hometown, eastern Taiwan is a small country where it's known for its magnificent scenery. The view is so beautiful that I swam outside, took a spa, and enjoyed myself. I also took a hike to the nearby mountain just so that I may have a better birdview of the town.  The hike up was fairly easy as the mountain already has a hiking trail.  Hiking in and out of woods and forrests, it's an experience that one must go through to truly enjoy it.  Overall, I had a good time in visiting the eastern Taiwan.If I have another opportunities to travel, I will make a point of sightseeing eastern Taiwan again.--------------------------------------------------------------One Impressive TripOn a Sunday afternoon, I didn't feel like cooking.  So I thought I would simply go out and grab a McDonald Big Mac.  Since there is a McDonald nearby, the trip to and back from McDonald was short and painless.  Some might consider it to be impressive.Once I got the Big Mac, I decided to enjoy it while watching some TV.  I had my Big Mac, fries, and drinks ready and grab the remote control.  Since the Sony's remote control is so small, I accidentally dropped it in my Big Mac and knocked over the drinks.  The soda spilled on top of the Big Mac and made it a little soggy.  But I didn't want to throw it away because I felt that would be too much of a waste.  So I ate the soggy Big Mac and fries.Couple of hours later, I felt the Big Mac kicking and screaming in my stomach.  I rushed into the bathroom and dumped a huge load.  I have a habit of looking over the load whenever I take a huge dump.  This time, I noticed that the vegetable weren't digested at all.  I thought that was a waste as well, so I grab the vegetable and ate it again.  I don't remember anything else afterward as I woke up couple of days later in a hospital.  Now this has been my impressive trip.

    2005-08-12 22:06:56 補充:

    解憂公主, the reason why I wrote this is to teach people not to take whatever answer is given to them. There're way too many people abuse this forum to cheat on their homework and assignments.

    參考資料: my puny brain
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