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where i was junior high school, i fell in love with a guy. after 3 months, we were break up. i am so sad that i cant without him to live. for this reason, i asked my mon to but a dog for me. a few days later, my mom and i went to the pets store in order to buy a dog,a

nd started the sweet life with Fly.

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  • 2 0 年前
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    When I was in junior high school, i fell in love with a guy. However, after 3 months we broke up. I was so sad about this - didn't want to live without him - that Iasked my mom to buy a pet dog for me. A few days later we went to a pet store  and purchased a cute dog who we then named Fly. This was the start of a sweet life together. 對不起,我男友堅持要把後面改寫,因為他覺得後面寫的不好!

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  • 2 0 年前

    When I was in junior high school, I fell in love with a boy. After 3 months, we broke up. I was so sad that I hardly could live without him. For this reason, I asked my mom to buy a dog for me. A few days later, my mom and I went to a pet store in order to buy a dog, and started a sweet life with 'Fly', the name of my dog.

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  • 2 0 年前

    When I was in junior high school,I fell in love with a guy. After 3 month,we broke up.Iwas so sad that I can`t live with out him.For this reason,I asked my mom to buy a dog for me.A few days later,my mom and I went to a pet store in order to buy a dog,and started a sweet life with Fly.

  • 2 0 年前

    When I was a student in junior high school, I fell in love with a guy. But we broke up after 3 monthes. I was so sad because I can't live without him. For this reason, I asked my mom to buy me a dog. Few days later, my mom and I went to a pet shop to buy a dog and after that I started happy life with Fly.

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