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幫我看看I am charmed by fish 這2段文章

I am charmed by fish

when I was in senior high school, my sister and I were going to a night maket to net the craps. In my memory, there are seven craps that we got . We were so exciting because it is the first time that we got so many fish. So, we got home "as soon as"這句話不知道用的對不對 we were beginning to find a good-looking contain to keep fish.

The second day, there are six craps had died. For this reason, I went to an aquarium to buy a few fish to along with my crap, and it is a start that I am gaga over the fish.

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crap打錯了..應該是CARP 鯉魚

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TO 土豆:

你幫我翻的中文譯不正確喔..CARP是鯉魚..EXCITING是另人興奮...我想有一定英文程度的人看ㄝ看的懂..我還沒到要寫中文出來給別人翻譯= =.

3 個已更新項目:

TO 土豆:

你幫我翻的中文譯不正確喔..CARP是鯉魚..EXCITING是另人興奮...我想有一定英文程度的人看ㄝ看的懂..我還沒到要寫中文出來給別人翻譯= =.

*我NIGHT MARKET打錯了.

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TO 土豆:

你幫我翻的中文譯不正確喔..CARP是鯉魚..EXCITING是另人興奮...我想有一定英文程度的人看ㄝ看的懂..我還沒到要寫中文出來給別人翻譯= =.

*我NIGHT MARKET打錯了.

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  • yun
    Lv 6
    2 0 年前
    最佳解答

    when I was in senior high school, my sister and I were going to a night maket to net the craps.

    --> my sister and I "WENT" to a night "market" to net the "carps" ( you sure they were carps? ^_^ )

    In my memory, there are seven craps that we got .

    --> If my memory served my right, we got seven carps.

    We were so exciting because it is the first time that we got so many fish.

    --> it "was" the first time 時式要一致 (其他都很棒)

    So, we got home "as soon as"這句話不知道用的對不對 we were beginning to find a good-looking contain to keep fish.

    --> As soon as we got home we found a good-looking container to keep them.

    The second day, there are six craps had died.

    --> The following day, six of them died.

    --> The following day, there were six carps dead.

    For this reason, I went to an aquarium to buy a few fish to along with my crap, and it is a start that I am gaga over the fish.

    加 "for this reason"語意有點怪

    ->Therefore I went to an aquarium to find my carp some companies.

    And that's the story how I started to be fascinated by fish.

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  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    真是對不起

    這不知是不是你要的

    修改後:

    When I also when read the high school

    My sister and I go to the night market to catch the fish together

    In my memory,We caught seven fish

    We were so exciting because it is the first time that we got so many fish

    As soon as we got home we found a good-looking container to keep them...(yun的)

    After we go home we found a good-looking container to keep them

    Second days had six fish to die

    Because this I went to the aquarium to buy other fish go home

    This is a reason which I starts to breed fish

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