匿名使用者
匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 2 0 年前

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My collection are many cards which my friends and cousins wrote me on my birthday,Christmas or

new year.

Today I show you the one of them.

It's from my friend who Imet in a summer camp.I haven't seen her for a long time,but sometimes we

send letters or cards to each other.

I put all my cards in a small box carefully.

I will keep them well forever and they will become the wonderful memories.

Cards are just papers with some beautiful colors and pictures,but they are all my friends'

sincere blessing.

As soon as Isee them,I feel warm.

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  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前
    最佳解答

    可不可以稍微用我的方式改寫一下:

    My collection includes many greeting cards which my friends and cousins sent to me on my brithday, Christmas or New Year.

    I will show you one of them today.

    This is from my friend who I met in the summer camp. I haven't seen her for a long time, but sometimes we still send letters or cards to each other.

    I put all my cards in a small box carefully.

    I will preserve them forever, and they will become part of my wonderful memories.

    Cards are not just papers with some beautiful pictures with beautiful color; they are my friends' sincere blessing.

    Everytime I look at them, I feel the warmth in my heart.

    參考資料: My brain
  • 昭儒
    Lv 5
    2 0 年前

    My collection are cards which my friends and cousins write me on my birthday,Christmas or new year.

    Today I am going to show you the one of them.

    It's from my friend who I met in a summer camp. I haven't seen her for a long time, but sometimes we send letters and cards to each other.

    I put all my cards in a small box carefully.

    I will keep them well forever and they will become my wonderful memories.

    Cards are just papers with some beautiful colors and pictures, but they are all my friends'

    sincere blessing.

    As soon as I see them, I feel warm.

    參考資料: my English teacher
  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    My collection is a bunch of cards which my cousins and friends wrote to me on my birthday, Christmas, and New Year. Today, I'll show you one of them.

    It was from my friend whom I met in summer camp. I haven't seen her for such a long period of time. But sometimes we do send letters or cards to each other.

    I put all my cards in a small box neatly. I'm sure that I will keep them forver, and all the cards will become my wonderful memories.

    Even though cards may be just papers with some beautiful borders and pictures, but my cards are special; my cards are all my friends and counsins' sincere blessings. Whenever I see these cards, I feel warm and touched.

  • XUAN
    Lv 7
    2 0 年前

    My collectionS are many cards which my friends and cousins wrote TO me on my birthday,Christmas or New YearS. Today I showED you one of them. It WAS from my friend who I met in a summer camp.I haven't seen her for a long time,but sometimes we send letters or cards to each other. I put all my cards in a small box carefully. I will keep them forever and they will become wonderful memories. Cards are just MADE FROM papers with some beautiful colors and pictures,but they are all my friends' sincere blessing. As soon as I see them,I feel warm.

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