[英文短文(參加夏令營的感想)]請幫我修訂...

請幫我修訂並給我小小的意見,謝謝! I took apart a summer camp during this summer vacation. It's an animal protection camp. There are many people who love animal very much. If you asked me, "You must love animals so much, or you don't want to spend much time on the train to Hualian." But I would say, not really. I am a... 顯示更多 請幫我修訂並給我小小的意見,謝謝!
I took apart a summer camp during this summer vacation. It's an animal protection camp. There are many people who love animal very much. If you asked me, "You must love animals so much, or you don't want to spend much time on the train to Hualian." But I would say, not really.
I am a shy person. ;-) hehehehe… … (gulp) One of the group leaders once told me, "Don’t be nervous. People here who love animals are all kind and warm hearted person." I can't agree it anymore. Not only these words but also their actions impressed me deeply.
Most of all, I got to know so many opportunities for me to help animals who are homeless or have been victims of abuse.
I was so happy to meet them. I had a really valuable experience.
更新: kukka:
這句話是想表達有人曾問我「你一定很喜歡小動物,才會想要多了解有關動物保護的議題,不然不會大老遠跑到花蓮去參加這個研習。」
(我最近才開始練習寫作,所以文章中常會出現辭不達意的情況。)
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