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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

翻譯囉,英翻中,還有....我的文法是不是怪怪的?

She is my senior high school classmate,we went to senior high school together everyday.

Now we are living together and going to the same university school.

She has a big smile,that let her make a lot of friends.

That's a feature of her personality.

Her specialty about manicure,make-up and cut one's hair.

She knows a lot of aboyt beautiful contain knowledge.

I think she will be a very good beautician.

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    She is my senior high school classmate,we went to senior high school together everyday.

    解釋:兩個句子中間要有聯接詞(and , or), 不然要把句子分開。

    建議: She is my classmate from senior high school. We went to school together everyday.

    翻譯:她是我高中同學,我們每天一起上學。

    Now we are living together and going to the same university school.

    解釋:住在一起及上同所大學不需要用現在進行式,用現在式就可以了。

    大學(University)之後不用再加學校 (School)。

    建議: We live together and go to the same university now.

    翻譯:我們現在住在一起,而且上同一所大學。

    She has a big smile,that let her make a lot of friends.

    解釋:我建議把第一個字句變成名詞(她有個燦爛的笑容)-〉(她燦爛的笑容)

    建議: Her big smile makes her have a lot of friends.

    翻譯:她燦爛的笑容使他交了很多朋友。

    That's a feature of her personality.

    解釋:我覺得用part of her personality 比較自然,或是直接說這是她的個性

    建議:

    1. It's part of her personality.

    2. It's her personality.

    翻譯

    1. 這是她個性的一部分。

    2. 這是她的個性。

    Her specialty about manicure,make-up and cut one's hair.

    解釋:這句話沒有動詞。聯接詞 and 的左右邊詞性要相同。

    建議:

    1. Her specialty is manicure, make-up and haircut.

    2. She is good at manicure, make-up and haircut.

    翻譯:她的專長是做指甲,化裝和剪頭髮。

    She knows a lot of aboyt beautiful contain knowledge.

    解釋:這種情況用 maintain, 不是 contain。常識在英文中不需要說出來。

    建議: She knows a lot about how to maintain beauty.

    翻譯:她知道很多有關于如何保養的常識。

    I think she will be a very good beautician.

    翻譯:我想她將會是很好的美容師。

    參考資料: 自己
  • 匿名使用者
    5 年前

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  • 1 0 年前

    She is my classmate at senior high school. We go to school together everyday.

    她是我的高中同學,當時我們每天都一起上學。

    Now we are living together and studying at the same university.

    現在我們住在一起並就讀於同一所大學。

    She makes a lot of friends by her sweet smile which is her pleasing trait.

    她特別的地方在於她那甜美的笑容,也因此結交到許多朋友。

    She specializes in manicure, make-up and haircut.

    她的專長是修指,化妝以及剪髮。

    She has a great sense of beauty.

    她有高度的審美觀。

    I believe she will become a very good beautician.

    我深信她將來會成為一位優良的美容師。

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