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英文好低幫我看1下文章呦>< ” 謝謝..

恩..這篇文章是我自己打的 因為要參加演講比賽

所以要自己寫稿 但是不確定文法對不對.... 所以麻煩英文底子不錯的人

幫我看看文章呦!! 因為這篇文章是演講式的稿子

所以如果你們認為有些地方可以加強或者是再多敘述什麼的話

歡迎提供意見喔^^ 非常感謝你們啦~~

Good afternoon,everyone. My name is Mitien, and my topic is When i am sad.

When I am sad, I would sometimes ask myself that what I am sad

for? In my childhood, I very like crying, so that I was laughed by others

people. Because I don't know what to do. I can't control my feeling.

Gradually, when I grow up, spirit become more and more riper, even

if I am sad﹐angry or in a bad mood, I can control myself in a short time,

and learn to make myself happy.

Now, when I feel sad, I will try to do something to forgot sadness,

such as listening to music, playing computer games, or playing the piano.

I think I should be graceful to my parents, because thay taught me

how to control my feelings.

Have you ever had a problem that frustrates you for a long time?

Just try to find the reason that make you feel bad, and please bring up your

courage then to face it and solve your problems.

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    Good afternoon, everyone. My name is Mitien, and my topic is When i am sad.

    When I am sad, I would sometimes ask myself what I am sad for? In my childhood, I cried so often that I was laughed by other people. I cry because I don't know what to do. I can't control my feelings.

    Gradually, when I grew up, I became more and more mature. Even when I am sad﹐angry or in a bad mood, I can control myself in a short time, and learn to make myself happy. Now, when I feel sad, I try to do something to forget sadness, such as listen to music, play computer games, or play the piano. I think I should be grateful to my parents, because they taught me how to control my feelings.

    Have you ever had a problem that frustrated you for a long time? Just try to find the reason that makes you feel bad, then bring up your courage to face and solve your problems.

    我盡力了喔!希望能有所幫助~

    2005-10-27 22:26:22 補充:

    看規定的時間。如果是三分鐘的話就有點少!

    參考資料: 自己
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