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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我看一下文章.15點!2段

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Zoe is a emulous girl. She is good at printing but she isn’t good at studying. She wants her study can be best, so she always sits in front of the desk to read the context book and gives up her favorite hobby, printing. Even if she is studying everyday, her study is still not good. Her parents are businessman and they often go to other countries to trade. Zoe’s parents can’t often along with her, they love each other.

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Unfortunately, a terrible thing had happened. Zoe’s parents had a crackup of an airplane. Zoe is so sad that she stop reading the book, she starts sing sorrowful songs everyday to memorize her parents. Today, she sings a song like before. Suddenly, the door bell is ringing, a headless man comes in and he leaves a cap. After the headless man leaves, Zoe wears the cap, and than, an amazed thing happen. Zoe can see and communicate with the ghosts. So, she starts finding her parents.

幫我看一下哪裡不通順..或者哪裡不懂(因為有些句子是我自己"創造"翻的)..還有文法錯誤喔....><

已更新項目:

我不是要翻譯..這就是我自己寫的阿....

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    1.

    Zoe was a competitive(專指人求勝心強的,好勝的) girl. She was good at printing but wasn’t good at studying. In order to get better grades, she always sat in the fore part of the classroom and concentrated in class; she even gave up her interest in painting. She was diligent every day; however, her efforts were in vain. Her study didn’t have any distinct improvement. Both her parents were businessmen; they had to go to different countries frequently. Although Zoe couldn’t often get along with her parents, they still loved each other.

    2.

    Unfortunately, a terrible thing was happened. Zeo was informed that the airliner which Zeo’s parents took crashed in a foreign country; she felt sorrow at the death of her parents and even couldn’t study. Afterward she started singing sad songs to recall her parents. One day while she sang song as usual, the door bell was ringing suddenly. A headless man come into the house and left a cap. The moment the man left, Zeo wore the cap immediately. At the moment, Zeo found it amazing that she could see and communicate with the ghosts. She decided to find her parents at once...

    ps' 講故事要用過去式表達喔!

    參考資料: myself
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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    我沒有檢舉你啦..= =.....

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  • 1 0 年前

    破曉大姐:

    真的很對不起.您發問的問題小弟我沒仔細看清楚

    造成您的不便.還請您諒解.

    小弟以後一定會看清楚問題內容才回答.不然一定又會像

    破曉大姐一樣檢舉我

    實在很無辜被奇摩警告

    實在很後悔當初的好心竟然是這樣的下場

    真的很對不起

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    1.

    Zoe was a emulous girl. She was good at printing but she wasn’t good at studying. She wanted to have progressed in her studies, so she always sat in front of the desk to read context books and gave up her favorite hobby, printing. Even if she studied everyday, her study was still not good. Her parents were businessmen and they often went to other countries to trade. Zoe’s parents couldn’t often go along with her, but they loved her.

    2.

    Unfortunately, a terrible thing was happened. Zoe’s parents had a crackup of an airplane. Zoe was so sad that she stopped reading the books; she started to sing sorrowful songs everyday to memorize her parents. Today, she sang a song like before. Suddenly, the door bell rang, and a headless man came in and he left a cap. After the headless man left, Zoe put on the cap, and than, an amazed thing happened. Zoe could see ghosts and communicate with them, so she started to find her parents.

    講故事盡量用過去式...有些幫你改過...

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