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急~~~請幫我檢查以下文章的文法是否正確???拜託~

請各位幫個忙~

幫我檢查以下的文章文法是否正確

如果有更好的想法、請不吝指教

感激不盡啊~~

In my free time, I love sports, expecially boxing. And it is the only one of my special skills. There are two still living players who matched with me, including the king of boxing, Mike Tyson, who just crashed. And the other one is the king of boxing, Muhammad Ali, who just got Parkinson's disease. Ha~ now I’m number one in the world.

文章內容純屬好玩、無任何意思!!

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大家的回覆都很好耶!!

我綜合三人的意見後完成文章

真是太感謝各位了

我選不出最好的

所以交付投票囉!!

再次感謝~

^o^"

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  • 2 0 年前
    最佳解答

    During my leisure time, I love to exercise, especially boxing. And bosing is my only one special skill. There are only two alive players who can match with me. One is former heavy weight champion, Mike Tyson, who has retired this year. The other one is former heavy weight champion, Muhammad Ali, who got Alzheimer's disease for many years. So, now, I'm the number one in the world.

  • John
    Lv 6
    2 0 年前

    When I have free time, I love sports, especially boxing, it's the only special skill I am good at. I had a boxing game with 2 palyers before, one is the king of boxing, Mike Tyson, but he didn't win. And the other one was the king of boxing, Muhammad Ali,

    he got Parkinson's disease lately. Ha Ha~ Right now I am the number One in the world

  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    I love doing sports in my free time,especially boxing.And it is my only special skills.There are two living players who could competitive with me,including the king of boxingwho just deceased,Mike Tyson.And the other one is also the king of boxing, Muhammad Ali, who just got Parkinson's disease. Ha~ now I’m number one in the world.

    *It's a funny article^^

    參考資料: my idea
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