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I want to introduce of this picture, is I the most favorite photo is my grandfather.At I read junior high school the grandfather died, the grandfather lived to 84 years old, calculating very longevity.Grandfather since the childhood very painful we, usually bought the candy, drinks and cooky for us to eat.This... 顯示更多 I want to introduce of this picture, is I the most favorite photo is my grandfather.At I read junior high school the grandfather died, the grandfather lived to 84 years old, calculating very longevity.Grandfather since the childhood very painful we, usually bought the candy, drinks and cooky for us to eat.This photo is a beats in the park, At that time I just 10 years old, look thin and black. , The grandfather looks to make amiable very much.The grandfather has already fasted die for 5 years, I think of him very much to now.
Although the grandfather died now,the grandmother return at, so be good friends with good show filial obedience her, because grandmother by themselves a person live, probably very solitary, the free meeting usually returns to see her, accompany her to chat, watch television, thus is a good granddaughter.
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更新 2: 我想要介紹ㄉ這張照片,是我最喜歡ㄉ外公,在我讀國中時外公就去世ㄌ,他活到84歲,算很長壽。外公在我們小ㄉ時後很疼我們,時常買糖果和飲料、餅乾給我們吃。這張照片是在公園裡拍ㄉ,是我10歲ㄉ時候,看起來又瘦又黑,外公看起來很和藹可親。外公已經去世5年ㄌ,我到現在都非常想念他。現在只剩下外婆還在,因為她自己一ㄍ人住,有些孤單,所以我們要常回去陪她聊天、看電視,作一ㄍ好孫女。
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