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幫我檢查是否正確 送10點短短句子而已 拜託了

I think Mr. Craven deserves redemption after subjecting his son to years of neglect.

After Mr. Craven’s wife dead, he had closed his mind for a long time. All he concerned was his wife, so that he neglected to care about others, even his son.

Thanks to Mary, she opened Mr. Crave’s mind again. Finally, Mr. Crave knew that there is an important thing he should do. He must spend more time with his child in order to make up the time as he was neglecting his son in the past. This way his son would be feeling about warmth of his father.

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    1 0 年前
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    我覺得應該是這樣:

    I think Mr. Craven deserves redemption after subjecting his son to years of neglect.

    After Mr. Craven’s wife died, he had closed his mind for a long time. All he concerned was his wife, so that he neglected to care about others, even his son.

    Thanks to Mary, she opened Mr. Craven’s mind again. Finally, Mr. Craven knew that there is an important thing he should do. He must spend more time with his child in order to make up the time as he was neglecting his son in the past. This way his son would be feeling about warmth of his father.

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