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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 2 0 年前

Elizabeth Blackwell網站重點~30點!

http://science-education.nih.gov/snapshots.nsf/sto...

請進入上面網站

列出至少7項concrete detail 同時也要commentary/response

For example:

1. It's a nice weather outside. → I want to go swimming.

很爛的例子...

反正就是一個detail要有一個commentary "or" response

至於我說的給三十點 (如果寫的好給四十點唷)

因為最多只能二十點,先給

然後我會再另外開一個題目,最佳解答的那個人去回答簽個名就得到另外的十點或二十點了

痾,不懂在說吧~

已更新項目:

當然是用英文, 你可以嗎? 英文要好唷...@@

不過你只有寫concrete detail耶, commentary "or" response呢?

而且concrete detail不用那麼長~(p.s. 不能字對字複製網站上唷)

謝囉

2 個已更新項目:

For example:

1.Elizabeth Blackwell organizes a unit of women nurse during the Civil War.→ (response or commentary) It is an opportunity for them to prove themselves to those who proclaim against them.

(只不過我需要重那個網站得到的concrete detail,但不是複製句子!!!)

3 個解答

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  • 2 0 年前
    最佳解答

    這位大大你又重貼啦,你先示範一個啦,不然大家真的很難下手..昨天我問的你看到了嗎?

    2005-11-16 15:11:33 補充:

    1.Elizabeth Blackwell was the first woman graduated from medical school in the US .

    --> She was thought to be brilliant, diplomatic, tenacious, and tough .

    2.In that time , people thought women are less intelligent than men and too physically weak to withstand the rigors of a medical education.

    --> But Elizabeth Blackwell took all the classes her male classmates took to prove that she is not the way they thought .

    3.At Elizabeth Blackwell's graduation, the speaker mentioned the significance of her achievement but without her name .

    --> It's just because she is a woman in that period which women could not attend college or have professions.

    4.After Elizabeth Blackwell studied the gynecology and obstetrics from Paris , she and her sister with Dr. Marie Zakrewska formed the New York Infirmary for Women and Children.

    --> It's a great opportunity for patient because women's gentle, sympathetic dispositions and maternal instincts can help them cure .

    5.In the nineteenth century, Blackwell was one of the more progressive doctors .

    --> Because she learned from scientific developments in bacteriology and pathology ,and she put emphasis on the main idea "the importance of preventing diseases as well as treating them."

    6.Blackwell and Nightingale selected and trained nurses for duty in the Civil War and helped establish the United States Sanitary Commission .

    -->Their successful achievement improved soldiers' conditions in military hospitals and gave them better diet and hygiene .

    7. To her faith in that hard time , Blackwells founded the Women's Medical College in New York City ,more and more women could have medical educations of the highest quality.

    --> Nowadays , with Elizabeth Blackwell's efforts , nearly half of the students in the top medical schools are women .

    參考資料: 自己
  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    被移除了...所以我才重貼阿

    其實我昨天不小心按檢舉到一個人,我懷疑他就去檢舉我...

    我有看到你的問題,我問了更多..但是就被移除咩

    2005-11-19 08:18:58 補充:

    Guess, concrete detail不是直接複製網站的吧?確定一下而已...

  • 2 0 年前

    是要用中文寫還是英文呢?

    1) Elizabeth Blackwell 是很僥倖才進去醫學院的 (her acceptance there was a fluke)--- 因為學校 risk 拒絕一個女性的申請, 於是他們讓學生來投票決定. 結果因為敵對學校都把這個申請當成笑話, 於是學生們就決定讓Elizabeth的申請通過, 而原來他是 unlikely candidate (未必成功的候選人).

    這樣的格式寫你滿意我就把其他六項完成.

    參考資料: 自己囉
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