匿名使用者
匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 2 0 年前

請各位協助我能否幫我糾正英文作文的錯誤呢?

這裡有我自己寫的一篇文章,但我不太瞭解哪有錯誤…

能否請各位幫我批改一下呢?或是說有比較好的句子可取替我所寫的~~

謝謝大家^^~

My Last Summer Vacation

I felt happy for the summer vacation was coming , My aunt took me go to Taipei and

visited my uncle . At the first day , I went to shop in the department store and my uncle bought some clothes for me . Of course I also ate delicious food while I was hungry . Eventhough I had a good time on the first day , I also tied . I stayed my uncle’s home and waited until the second day come , at the second day , My uncle invited us to the beach by MRT , it is very fast to take MRT , so many people are on the beach as we got there , but I didn’t care if there has many people , it was fun when

I went to the beach , that I liked swimming , playing beach volleyball , and so on .

It was a good memory to go to Taipei .

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  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前
    最佳解答

    My Last Summer Vacation

    It got me so excited to think that the summer vacation was soon arriving.

    As usual, my aunt would bring me with her to Taipei to visit my uncle.

    On the first day, I went to the department store for shopping, and my uncle bought some clothes for me . Of course I also had some delicious food when I was feeling hungry . I had a good time on the first day, however, I got so tired in the end of day. I stayed at my uncle's home and couldn't wait for the second day to come.

    On the second day , My uncle took us to the beach by MRT. Many people were on the beach as we got there , but I didn't mind if there were many people. It was always fun playing on beach, because I liked swimming , playing beach volleyball , and so on .

    I had a good memory for the visit to Taipei.

    2005-11-22 01:03:52 補充:

    It got me so excited …那個excited怎麼不是exciting,

    前面的 It 不是物嗎,讓我很興奮,不是用exciting嗎?

    而excited不是我對什麼東西有興趣嗎??

    能不能請你講一下呢??因為我不太懂~~謝謝你^^

    *** It gets me excited ***

    其實我學英文是不學文法的

    我是用片語來學英文

    不會解釋ㄟ, 但是肯定是對的用法

    參考資料: 還算不錯, 多記一些片語用法, 就會更加進步了
  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    My Summer Vacation

    I was happy when summer vacation finally came.

    My aunt took me to visit my uncle who live in Taipei.

    I went to xx department store with my uncle at the first day I arrived.

    He bought me some clothes and treated me with delicious food when I was hungry.We went home and stayed with my uncle that night. We had great time in that day.

    Next day, we went to beach by taking MRT. It was so crowded and yet it was fast while taking MRT.

    I went swimming, playing beach volleyball and so on. It was really fun and memorable in my last summer's vacation.

    改了很多不知你覺得如何?

    參考資料: myself
  • 2 0 年前

    My Last Summer Vacation

    I felt happy for the coming summer vacation. My aunt took me to Taipei to visit my

    uncle. The first day we went shopping in the department store and my uncle bought some clothes for me. Of course I ate delicious food when I was hungry. Even though

    I was tired, I had a good time that day. The second day my uncle took us to the

    beach by MRT. It was very fast to take MRT there. There were many people on the

    beach when we got there but I didn't care about that. It was fun at the beach because

    I liked swimming, playing beach volleyball and so on. It is a good memory to visit

    Taipei.

  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    我去年夏天暑假來我因此感到開心,我姑母帶我去找台北和拜訪我的叔叔。 在第一天,我在百貨商店去商店,我的叔叔為我買一些衣服。 當我飢餓時,當然我也吃美味的食品。 就算我在第一天玩得愉快,我也很累。 我待在我的叔叔家並且等待,直到第2 天來, 在第2 天, 我的叔叔邀請我們做捷運到海灘, 捷運是非常快的, 當我們到達那裡時,那裡有好多人在海灘上, 但是我不關心是否在那裡有很多人, 我走向海灘,這是有趣,我喜歡游泳,打沙灘排球,等等。 去台北是好記憶。

    參考資料: 以學9年的英文基礎
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