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求英文高手幫我修改一下這段英文~~急!!(20點)

這是我的英文演講稿 可以幫我修改錯誤還有改的流暢好嗎

My favorite artist is Ai Otsuka. She is a Japanese pop singer.

she started her career when she sent a tape of her song to companies,

then She signed up with Avex Trax.

her first album Love Punch was a huge success.

Surprisingly, her second single called "Sakuranbo" stayed on the Oricon charts for 85 weeks.

Soon, She became the most outstanding rookie. Now on, her singles sell incredibly well.

Why I admire her so much is because her amazing creation ability.

She wrote her own songs and also co-produced it.

Her music ranges from upbeat catchy rock music to touching ballads.

I also like her sweet and energetic voice,and her voice has a soothing tone in it.

I'm sure that depending on her genius she'll shine much more in the future.

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  • 2 0 年前
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    My favorite artist is Ai Otsuka. She is a Japanese pop singer.

    She started her career by sending her song tapes to several companies, which landed her a contract with Avex Trax.

    Her career took off with her first album Love Punch, which was a huge success.

    More amazingly, her second single, "Sakuranbo", stayed on the Oricon charts for as long as 85 weeks.

    Soon she became the fastest rising star. From that moment on, her singles remain top hits.

    The reason I admire her so much is because she is amazingly talented.

    She writes her own songs and also takes part in co-production.

    Her music ranges from upbeat catchy rocks to touching ballads.

    I also admire her sweet, yet energetic voice, which also has a soothing ring to it.

    I'm sure that her talent will made she shine even more brilliantly in the future.

  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

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  • 2 0 年前

    My favorite artist is a Japanese pop singer named Ai Otsuka.

    She started her career when she sent a tape of her song to companies, of which then she signed up with Avex Trax.

    Her first album Love Punch was a huge success.

    Surprisingly, her second single called "Sakuranbo" stayed on the Oricon charts for 85 weeks.

    Soon, she earned the title of "most outstanding rookie". From then on, her singles sold incredibly well.

    The reason I admire her so much is because of her amazing ability to create songs.

    She writes her own songs and also co-produces it.

    Her music ranges from upbeat catchy rock music to touching ballads.

    I also like her sweet, energetic voice,which also has a soothing tone in it.

    I'm sure that because of her abilties, she'll shine out even more in the future.

    參考資料: 住美國8年過 有美國大學生英文程度
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