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What kinds of life styles do you look forward to? Do you like the country life or the city life? In the country, the air is so fresh, but in the city, the air is so dirty because of air pollution. It is very quiet around you in the country; however, there are many noisy in the city. For example: noisy of cars, people etc. People who live in the city may be inhospitable, but people who live in the country may be passionate. The life tempo may be fast in the city. In contrast, the life tempo may be slow in the country. There are main financial centers in the city, so there are a lot of jobs to find. But, in the country, agricultural pursuits are mostly jobs you can find. There are many public facilities in the city and those facilities are convenient to people. For example, there is a good transportation system in Taipei. In the country, it is very difficult to find something you want to do.

People who live in the city may like nightlife. However, people who live in the country used to hit the hay early.

If people like convenient life, nightlife, and busy work, they may fit the city life. In contrast, if they like fresh air, quiet environment, and regular life style, they may fit the country life. Everyone has a his/her own life style.

請問要寫Compare&contrast的ESSAY 我這樣寫可以嗎 有哪裡需要改的 我是不太懂Compare&contrast的essay該怎麼寫..

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    1 0 年前
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    (1)What kind of the places do you look forward to live in ? Do you like the country or the city ? I am going to compare their differences: evironment, tempo of life , and traffic.

    (2) In the country, the air is so fresh, but in the city, the air is so dirty because of the air pollution. It is very quiet around you in the country; however, there are many noises in the city. For example: noise of cars, noise of people etc. People who live in the city may like a nightlife. However, people who live in the country used to hit the hay early.

    (3) People who live in the city may be inhospitable, but people who live in the country may be passionate. The life tempo may be fast in the city. In contrast, the life tempo may be slow in the country. There are main financial centers in the city, so there are a lot of jobs to find. But, in the country, agricultural pursuits are mostly jobs you can find.

    (4) There are many public facilities in the city and those facilities are convenient to people. For example, there is a good transportation system in Taipei. In the country, it is very difficult to find something you want to do.

    (5) If people like convenient life, nightlife, and busy work, they may fit the city life. In contrast, if they like fresh air, quiet environment, and regular life style, they may fit the country life. Everyone has a his/her own life style.

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    寫的還不錯喔!!可是最好先在開始的時候(1)..標明你要比較哪些部分...還有她們相同的部分....我上禮拜才寫過Compare&contrast的essay..加油!!

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