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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文作文「我的夢想」,請各位幫忙文章上的修正~

這裡有一篇我自己寫的英文作文,題目是我的夢想。

想請問各位,我自己寫的這一篇大約可得到多少分,

那能否請幫個忙看看「文法」上有無錯誤~~

或是有無比較好的句子可代替,以及有哪些方面是需要修正的

真的很謝謝各位~^^

My Ambition

In the past time , I never thought what I want to be in the future .

Nomatter what my mon said , I just did and followed her opinion to learn Childhood Education .

However , I find I wasn't into Childhood Education .

It wasn't until couple years ago that I find I was interested in English .

Now I hope I could write and speak good English .

Eventhough I find it too late , my brother said to me :

It wasn't too late if I would like to learn .

I am glad that my mon is agree my thoughts and always encourage me .

So , I am not feel choppy , I have a dream to get come true .

I learn English hardly and dreams to be a best social worker in the future .

已更新項目:

choppy是混亂的意思,就是我不再感到混亂~

不曉得這樣對不對~…

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
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    My Ambition

    In the past, I never thought what I want to be in the future.

    No matter what my mom said, I just took her advice and learn Childhood Education.

    However, I find that I was not into Childhood Education.

    I did not realize that I was interested in English until a couple of years ago.

    Now I hope that I could write and speak good English.

    Even though I thought I found this out too late, my brother said to me:

    ”It wasn't too late if you would like to work on your dream.”

    I am glad that my mom agreed with my decisions. She even encouraged me.

    So , I am not feel choppy , I still have a dream that is awaiting to be fulfilled.

    I learn English with all my heart because I dreamt to be the best social worker in the future.

    'So , I am not feel choppy' 這句不太明白. 需要更多幫忙的話email到rice_kei@hotmail.com

    參考資料: 自己
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