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Many of the original Halloween traditions have developed today into fun activities for children. The most popular one is ”trick or treat”. On Halloween night, the kids dressed in costumes and visited their neighbors. When someone answered the door, the kids shouted ”trick or treat”. What it means is “give us a treat, or we’ll play a trick on you!” The people give them some candies or some coins.

Another popular Halloween activity is made jack-o’-lanterns .Why do we make jack-o’-lanterns? Because long log time ago, there was a man who was called Jack. He always had drunk. Once he played a trick on the devil, the devil was very angry. So the devil punished Jack. He can’t go to heaven or hell. He only can walk in the dark world. From now on he took jack-o’-lantern to light the road. But now the people look jack-o’-lanterns like a Halloween's symbolize.

The other popular Halloween activity is go to the haunted house. You can meet many scary things. For example ghosts, witches, skeletons, and other scary things. You might shock by scary things. So you had better not go to the haunted house just yourself.

Do you want to put yourself into the Halloween’s exciting atmosphere just right now? Halloween is very lively, brisk and animated holiday. Children enjoy very much and so do adults. But now have some bad guys damage this festival. They overdo some jokes to somebody let them get injury. How terrible! We must respect and realize each country’s cultures , not hurting people person.

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  • Linda
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    1 0 年前
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    On Halloween night, the kids dressed in costumes and visited their neighbors. When someone answered the door, the kids shouted ”trick or treat”. What it means is “give us a treat, or we’ll play a trick on you!” The people give them some candies or some coins.

    * you are explain what is " trick or treat", you shall just use present tense for all.

    * another popular Halloween activitt is to make jack-o'-lanterns.

    there was a man who was called Jack.

    * there was a man called Jack, who was always drunk.

    * Once time, he played a trick on the devil. The devil was very angry and he wanted to punish Jack. The devil could not go to the heaven or the hell, and he had to walk in the dark world instead. He made Jack became a lantern to light the road for him. Years later, jack-o'-lanterns become a sinbol of halloween.

    *The other popular Halloween activity is to go to the haunted house.

    * YOu may see scary thing, such as ghosts, witches, skeletons and etc.

    You might shock by scary things. So you had better not go to the haunted house just yourself.

    * it is better not to so this alone, in case you get shock by scary things.

    Halloween is very lively, brisk and animated holiday.

    * Halloween is a lively, brisk and animated holiday.

    Children enjoy very much and so do adults.

    * Children enjoy it very much and so do adults.

    But now have some bad guys damage this festival. They overdo some jokes to somebody let them get injury. How terrible! We must respect and realize each country’s cultures , not hurting people person.

    * Unfortunately, there are some bad guys damage this festival. They overdo some jokes and cause some injury every year. We shall respect human rights and realize the background of this holiday to avoid hunting people while enjoying doing these activities.

    * the layout is good. You shall organize these sentenses a little bit more, and avoid the Chinese-English.

    參考資料: myself
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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    哇 ~~

    好多喔 ...... 不知要怎麼回答

    不過你的文章 應該要改成為現在式 like: when someone answered the door, 應該是 when someone answers the door.

    因為你是在說你說的是節日 而部是在說一個過去式ㄉ東西 ,,,

    還有 trick or treat should be trick or treating

    還有 你的 "what it means is ' give.....' " ..覺得聽起來怪怪的 ....

    Another popular Halloween activity is TO MAKE .... not made .

    對不起喔 ... 不知道要怎麼回答 ..gonna stop right here .... > <

    希望能幫助你一點

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  • 1 0 年前

    請問是要翻譯他嘛?

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