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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 2 0 年前

英文短文幫忙改正!!!(限今天20點)

Revising: Sentence fragments

Revise the following paragraph to eliminate sentence fragment by

combining them with main clauses or rewriting them as main clauses.

Baby red-eared slider turtles are brightly colored. With bold

patterns on their yellowish undershells. Which serve as a warning

to predators. The bright colors of skunks and other animals. They

signal that the animals will spray nasty chemicals. In contrast, the

turtle’s colors warn largemouth bass. That the baby turtle will actively

defend itself. When a bass gulps down a turtle. The feisty

baby claws an bites. Forcing the bass to spit it out. To avoid a similar

painful experience. The bass will avoid other baby red-eared

slider turtles. The turtle loses its bright colors as it grows too big.

For a bass’s afternoon snack.

若能解釋改錯原因更好~拜託了!

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  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Baby red-eared slider turtle are brightly colored with bold patterns on their yellowish undershells, which serve as a warning to predators.

    原文裡的第一句至第三句可以連成一句較長的句子, 因為它們講的都是草龜寶寶的外觀及用途. (when you have a sentence that starts with "with" after the first clause, it usually comes after a coma)

    The bright colors of skunks and other animals signal that the animals will spray nasty chemicals.

    其他鮮豔外觀的用途的例子, bright colors = possibility of getting nasty chemicals. "Bright colors" signal the presence of nasty chemical.

    In contrast, the turtle’s colors warn large mouth bass that the baby turtle will actively defend itself.

    解釋為什麼草龜會有鮮豔的顏色以及牠被獵食時的反應

    When a bass gulps down a turtle, the feisty baby claws and bites, forcing the bass to spit it out.

    草龜被bass吞食時所會做的事

    To avoid a similar painful experience, the bass will avoid other baby red-eared slider turtles.

    Bass吃過草龜之後的反應: reason --> result

    The turtle loses its bright colors as it grows too big for a bass’s afternoon snack.

    草龜長大後由於size的關係不會再被bass獵食, 連帶不再需要鮮豔的顏色

    感覺上好像是在翻譯而不是解釋, 抱歉...中文不好...hopefully this will be some help for you...

    參考資料: 自己的英文
  • 2 0 年前

    Baby red-eared slider turtles are brightly colored.

    The bold patterns on their yellowish undershells serve as a warning to predators.

    The bright colors of skunks and other animals signal that the animals will spray nasty chemicals.

    In contrast, the turtle’s colors warn largemouth bass that the baby turtle will actively defend itself.

    When a bass gulps down a turtle, the feisty baby claws an bites and force the bass to spit it out.

    To avoid a similar painful experience, the bass will avoid other baby red-eared

    slider turtles.

    The turtle loses its bright colors as it grows too big for a bass’s afternoon snack.

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