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My firend ask me to play the guitar,on their birthday party.

"No!"I said right away.

"I haven`t play my guitar in public yet!"

"I`m a..afraid of the CROWD!!"

Maybe I don`t have enough courage for this show yet.

I`ll get nervous, When I`m nervous, I`ll get wrong.

And the show will be really bad.

I need mmmmmmore practice :(

GOD!!

Give me some more courage!

(m:Why!? u have refuse the show already.)

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  • Genis
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    My friend asked me to play guitar at his birthday party.

    * 如果是一個朋友問的話, 後面就用his [男生] 或者her [女生]

    * 如果是幾個朋友一起問, 後面就用their

    "No!" I rejected right away.

    * 用rejected [拒絕] 來代替 said 會比較好

    "I have never played guitar in front of public!"

    * [我從來沒試過在眾人面前彈吉他] (我想你是這個意思吧?)

    "I'm afraid of the crowd!!"

    * 這句okay

    Maybe I did not have enough courage for the show.

    * 回想這件往事, 所以用過去式

    I would be nervous, and when I'm nervous, I'll make mistakes.

    * [我會很緊張, 當我緊張的時候, 我會彈錯]

    Then the show would turn out bad.

    * [表演會搞砸] 註: And是連接詞, 盡量避免放在句首

    I need more practice.

    * 這句okay

    God! Please give me more courage to perform!

    * [神啊! 請給我勇氣讓我可以表演]

    (m: What for? You have already rejected the offer)

    * [為啥? 你已經拒絕人家的提議啦]

    * What for = 為了什麼

    * reject = 拒絕

    * offer = 提議

    完整篇:

    My friend asked me to play guitar at his birthday party.

    "No!" I rejected right away. "I have never played guitar in front of public! I'm afraid of the crowd!!"

    Maybe I did not have enough courage for the show. I would be nervous, and when I'm nervous, I'll make mistakes. Then, the show would turn out bad.

    I need more practice. God! Please give me more courage to perform!

    (m: What for? You have already rejected the offer)

    如果是我寫的話 ...

    My friend asked me to play guitar at his birthday party.

    [我朋友叫我在他的生日派對上表演吉他]

    "No!" I rejected right away. "I've never played guitar in front of the public! I'm afraid to face the crowd ..."

    ["不行!" 我立刻拒絕. "我從來沒有在眾人面前彈吉他! 我會害怕 ..."

    Perhaps I'm not confident to perform in public since I would get nervous. When I'm nervous, I will make mistakes. Then, the show would turn out bad.

    或許我沒有信心在眾人前表演 ... 因為我會很緊張. 當我緊張的時候, 我會彈錯. 然後, 表演就會搞砸了.

    I need more practice ... God! Please give me the courage to perform!

    (m: What for? You've already rejected the offer)

    我需要多練習 ... 神啊! 請給我表演的勇氣吧!

    (m: 為啥? 你已經拒絕人家啦)

    參考資料: 個人意見
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  • Linda
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    My friend asked me to play guitar at their birthday party.

    "No!" I said right away, "I haven't played guitar in public yet! I ...I am afraid of the crowd..."

    Maybe I did not have enough courage for that show yet. I know I will get nerous, and make mistakes during the performance. Everything can go wrong when I am nervous.

    I need more practice, a lot more. God! Please give me more courage to do it next time!

    *The story (conversation) happened in the past, that is why you need to use past tense.

    * after the conversation, you are thinking to yourself. (That is what it looks to me). You can just use present tense.

    * what is (m:Why!? u have refuse the show already.)???

    參考資料: myself
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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    My friend asks me to play guitar on their birthday party.

    "No!", i said right away.

    "I have not played guitar in the public yet!", said I.

    " I am afraid of the crowd."

    Maybe I do not have enough courage for this yet.

    I will get nervous, and when i am nervous, [I will not play well]. (This is optional; you can put whatever you want here.)

    I need more practise.

    God, please give me more courage!

    (m: why!? You have already refused not to play.)

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