灰橘色 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我改英文對話~(15點!!)

A:Where did you go last weekend?

B:I went to "traveling" concent of Kevin Kern.I've been "looking forward to" it two years.

A:I can not believe that you like piano music!

B:I love "soft" music.It let me releax.

A:Kevin Kern's music just only piano.That's so bored!

B:But he "mix" music with feeling.I feel that he likes a music "artist"!

A:It "fell likes" very nice!I should change my mind.

B:You can try to listen his "work".

A:"I'd love to"!If I have free time.Did you went to the concent with your family?

B:No,with my cousin.We went to the Danshui before the concert.

A:I "hear about" that "sunset" was the famous "view" of Danshui.

B:You are right!"Along" the Danshui river,I saw many "couples".

A:I can "imagine" how much "romantic"!(我用中文邏輯"我可以想像有多浪漫"翻ㄉ~不知道對不對請幫我改正確ㄉ)

B:I took many "photographs" with my cousin.

A:I think that you had a good time.

B:Yes.Tha't a "impress" "memory" to me!

這篇對話是我ㄉ期末考成績~非常重要!!希望肯幫我ㄉ善心人士能針對文法時態還有語意幫我修正~其中有" "ㄉ單字或片語是一定要出現ㄉ~請別改掉!!謝謝

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    A:Where did you go last weekend?

    B:I went to the concert of Kevin Kern. I've been "looking forward to" it for two years.

    A:I can not believe that you like piano music!

    B:I love "soft" music. It makes me feel releaxing.

    A:Kevin Kern's music has piano only. That's so bored!

    B:But he composed music with feeling.I think that he's a music "artist"!

    A:It sounds very nice! Maybe I should change my mind.

    B:You can try to listen his "pieces".

    A:"I'd love to"! If I have free time. Did you went to the concert with your family?

    B:No, with my cousin.We went to the Danshui before the concert.

    A:I "heard about" that "sunset" was the famous "view" of Danshui.

    B:You are right!"Walking along" the Danshui river,I saw many "couples".

    A:I can "imagine" how"romantic" it is!(我用中文邏輯"我可以想像有多浪漫"翻ㄉ~不知道對不對請幫我改正確ㄉ)

    B:I took many "photographs" with my cousin.

    A:I think that you had a good time.

    B:Yes.That's an "impressive" "memory" to me!

    參考資料: 自己
  • ?
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    1 0 年前

    A: Where did you go last weekend?

    B: I went to one of Kevin Kern's live concerts. I've been looking forward to it for two years.

    A: I can't believe that you like piano music!

    B: I love soft music, it makes me feel relaxed.

    A: Kevin Kern's music is only piano music, that's so boring!

    B: But he mixed/combined his music with his feelings. I think he really is a musician and an artist.

    A: It seems very nice! Maybe I should change my mind.

    B: you should try listening to his works/pieces.

    A: I'd love to, if I have free time!Did you go to the concert with your family?

    B: No, with my cousin. We went to Danshui before the concert.

    A: I've heard about Danshui's beautiful sunset view.

    B: You're right! I saw many lovers along Danshui River.

    A: I can imagine how romantic it must have been.

    B: I took many photographs with my cousin.

    A: I think you had a good time.

    B: Yes. That was an impressive memory for me.

    整個是沒有錯,但是有些" "裡面的實在是怪怪的耶

    ㄅ過其他都幫你改對ㄌ

    希望可以囉

    參考資料: 在國外長大的
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