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Today I will going to introducing one of my favorite movie,it called 「the day after tomorrow」

This movie is about environment conservation which predicted the Earth destiny of disaster because of humanity's destruction in the future。

Describing the nature ecological balance is out of control completely

Therefore ,having the unusual weather that the flood,big storm,the tornado ,the temperature falloff and so on。

This science fiction use massive special effect let us have experiences the same situation and make audiences ponder will that our surrounding is very preciously for everyone and realized the Earth protection is very important

不要複雜化了 我怕怕

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Today I [will going to] AM introducing one of my favorite movieS

    不須要用will和going to, 可以直接用am來表示你現在要做的事情, 也就是介紹這部電影.

    “movie”這裡要加 “s,” 因為前面用 “one of,” 表示你喜歡的電影不只一個

    it IS called, [「 ]The Day After Tomorrow[」]

    電影的名字是人取的, 不是自己取的, 所以用被動式, 加個 is.

    在called的後面要加個逗點

    英文的引號是用 “”, 你用的這兩個是中文的引號

    電影名字的四個字首都要大寫

    This movie is about environment (要加al, 變成形容詞) conservation which (拿掉which, 用and it) predicted (用predicts, 不用過去式) the Earth (Earth後面加 's) destiny (拿掉destiny, 用future; “地球未來的命運,” 不用這麼麻煩, 直接用 “地球的未來”Earth’s future 就可以了) of (去掉of用is) disaster (disastrous) because of humanity's destruction in the future。(去掉in the future, 加 of himself表示是人類自我毀滅)

    (你這裡沒有主詞, 用It) Describing (用小寫的d; describing要改成describes) the nature ecological balance is out of control completely (這部份可以改為: that the nature is out of control completely.)

    Therefore ,(你這裡沒有主詞, 用there ) having (having改成is) the (拿掉the) unusual weather (加入pattern, weather pattern 在國外常用表示通常的天氣狀況) that (拿掉that, 改用 such as “例如”) the (去掉the) flood (floods),big storm (storms),the (去掉the) tornado (tornadoes),the temperature fall (falls) off, and so on。

    This science fiction (加movie) use (uses因為是第三人稱單數) massive special effect (effects, 因為不只一個特效; 後面加 and連接詞) let (lets, 主詞還是movie) us have (不用have) experiences (experience) the same situation (加as in the movie.) and (拿掉and用It來開始另一個句子, 否則原來的太長了) make (makes, 主詞是It) (加the) audiences ponder will (拿掉will) that our surrounding (environment) is very preciously (precious) for everyone (拿掉 for everyone) and realized (realize, 因為主動詞是makes, 所以這裡用原形) (插入that protecting) the Earth protection ( 拿掉 protection) is very important.

    實在很抱歉, 因為我寫的很多, 超過允許的字數, 所以我把正確的句子寫法放在下面的意見欄裡, 供你參考.

    2005-12-23 14:57:58 補充:

    Today I am introducing one of my favorite movies, and it is called, “The Day After Tomorrow.”

    This movie is about environmental conservation, and it predicts the Earth's future is disastrous because of humanity's destruction of himself.

    2005-12-23 14:58:51 補充:

    (繼續)

    It describes that the nature is out of control completely.

    Therefore, there is the unusual weather pattern such as floods, big storms, tornadoes, the temperature falls off, and so on.

    2005-12-23 14:59:24 補充:

    (繼續)

    This science fiction movie uses massive special effects and lets us experience the same situation as in the movie. It makes audiences ponder that our environment is precious, and realize that protecting the Earth is very important.

  • Genis
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    1 0 年前

    完整篇:

    Today I am going to introduce one of my favorite movies. It's called "The Day After Tomorrow." The story takes place in the future, where the environmental conservation predicts that there will be many disasters on Earth due to artificial destructions. The ecological balance is completely out of control. Therefore, floods, storms, tornados, and fluctuating temperatures occur all around the world. Massive special effects are used in the production, allowing audiences to experience the same situation as it happens in the film. It also makes audience realize that our Earth is very precious and everyone should protect our home

    Today I will going to introducing one of my favorite movie,it called 「the day after tomorrow」

    * 今天 = 現在式

    * one of my favorite movies => 眾多影片的其中一個 (複數)

    * it IS called => 被稱為,它的名字是別人取的

    This movie is about environment conservation which predicted the Earth destiny of disaster because of humanity's destruction in the future。

    * 我猜的意思是:故事發生在未來世界,氣象局預計到地球會因為人為破壞而面臨很多災難

    * 形容故事情節 => 現在式

    Describing the nature ecological balance is out of control completely.

    * 生態平衡包括了大自然,nature 可以省略

    Therefore, having the unusual weather that the flood, big storm, the tornado , the temperature falloff and so on.

    * 意思不完整 => 缺少了名詞 (noun)

    This science fiction use massive special effect let us have experiences the same situation and make audiences ponder will that our surrounding is very preciously for everyone and realized the Earth protection is very important.

    * 句子太長,可以分為兩句

    - Massive special effects are used in the production, allowing audiences to experience the same situation as it happens in the film. [製作這影片的時候使用了很多的特別效果,讓觀眾置身其中]

    - It also makes audience realize that our Earth is very precious and everyone should protect our home. [這影片也讓觀眾知道我們的地球是很珍貴,所以要保護我們的家園]

    參考資料: 個人意見
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