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拜託請英文高手幫忙改正短文!(限聖誕節20點 )

Revise the following paragraph to eliminate unnecessary shift in person, number, tense, mood, and voice.

Driving in snow need not be dangerous if you practice a few rules. First, one should avoid fast starts, which prevent the wheels from gaining traction and may result in the car’s getting stuck. Second, drive more slowly than usual, and you should pay attention to the feel of the car: If the steering seemed unusually loose or the wheels did not seem to be grabbing the road, slow down. Third, avoid fast stops, which lead to skids. One should be alert for other cars and intersections that may necessitate that the brakes be applied suddenly. If you need to slow down, the car’s momentum can be reduced by downshifting as well as by applying the brakes. When braking, press the pedal to the floor only if you have antilock brakes; otherwise, the pedal should be pumped in short bursts. If you feel the car skidding, the brakes should be released and the wheel should be turned into the direction of the skid, and then the brakes should be pressed or pumped again. If one repeated these motions, the skid would be stopped and the speed of the car would be reduced.

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拜託英文高手改正這篇短文~最好能寫出改正的理由~讓我清楚一些!拜託了!謝謝

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    照題目的原意

    這個問題不是要你單純地修正文法, 也不是要改通順, 也不是要加字句

    我用括弧把應該改正的地方標示出來, 括弧內沒有字是因為要刪除掉不必要的用字, 這樣你才可以跟原文比較差別的地方

    Driving in snow (needs) not be dangerous if you practice a few rules.

    First, (you) should avoid fast starts, which (prevents) the wheels from gaining traction and (which) may result in the car’s getting stuck.

    Second, (you should) drive more slowly than usual () and () pay attention to the feel of the car(.)

    (If) the steering (seems) unusually loose or the wheels (do) not seem to be grabbing the road, (you should) slow down.

    Third, (you should) avoid (a) fast (stop), which (leads) to (a skid).

    (You) should be alert for other cars and intersections that may necessitate that the brakes be applied suddenly.

    If you need to slow down, the car’s momentum can be reduced by downshifting as well as by applying the brakes.

    When braking, (you should) press the pedal to the floor only(.)

    (But if) you have antilock brakes(), the pedal should be pumped in short bursts.

    If you feel the car skidding, the brakes should be released and the (wheels) should be turned into the direction of the skid, and then the brakes should be pressed or pumped again.

    If (you) (repeat) these motions, the skid (can) be stopped and the speed of the car (can) be reduced.

    我也不是很確定我抓到所有應該改正的地方, 我只是建議這個題目應該是這樣解題的, 就是把所有的One改成you, 要不就是把所有的You改成one, 我對全文改成You比較不用花上太多時間解題

    但是也有其他解題的方式, 例如把全文改成被動態, 這種就需要花上更多的時間, 看有沒有其他網友願意幫你動動頭腦

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  • 1 0 年前

    Driving in snow is not necessarily dangerous if you observe a few rules. First of all, one should avoid full throttle on the gas pedal as the car starts, which will certainly result in the car being bogged down in the snow as tyres lose traction. Secondly, drive slower than usual, and pay extra attention to the balance of the car. If the steering wheel feels unusually loose or the tyres seem to lose its grab, slow down. Thirdly, avoid sudden stoppage, which leads to skidding. One should always be aware of the surrounding traffics and the intersections that may necessitate the brakes to be applied in a short notice of time. If you need to slow down, it can be achieved by either downshifting the gears or by applying the brakes gradually over a longer distance. When braking, hit the brake pedal hard only if you have antilock brakes. Otherwise, the pedal should be pumped in short pulses. In the case of skidding, the brakes should first be released and the wheel be aligned into the same direction as that of the skidding before applying the brakes gently again. The car should be able to slow down and stop skidding after this procedure has been repeated several times.

    不知道如何解釋文法上的用法﹐如果您對上面個別的用詞有所疑問還請您通知我﹐我會盡力而為。

  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    Driving in snow may not be a dangerous activity if you follow a few simple rules. First, one should avoid fast starts to prevent wheels from gaining traction and hence, the car gets stucked . Second, drive slower than usual, and pay attention to any unusal circumstances of the car: If the steering wheel seemed unusually loose or the wheels did not seem to be grabbing the road, slow down. Third, avoid sudden stops, which lead to skids. One should be alert for other cars and intersections. If you need to slow down, the speed can be reduced by downshifting as well as by applying the brakes. When braking, press the pedal to the floor only if you have antilock brakes; otherwise, the pedal should be pumped in short bursts. If you feel the car skidding, the brakes should be released and the wheel should be turned into the direction of the skid, and then the brakes should be pressed again. If one repeated these motions, the skid would be stopped and the speed of the car would be reduced.

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