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Taipei 101 became the tallest

Taipei 101 became the tallest building in the world in Dec, 31, 2004.

In the early 18th century, the board of trade planned aggressively to build up the Taipei 101.So that the government can attract the foreign company working in Taiwan in order of in economic development. It takes very long time to set up Taipei 101 started in Jan; 13,1998and finished in dec, 31, 2004.And the location of Taipei 101 is in the business at the east area of Taipei.

Tsu yuan li, the Taipei 101 designer, prefers the art of the East. So he combined his works with the culture of the East and West. Taipei 101 is a perfect representative of his works. When we take a look of Taipei 101, the facade of Taipei 101 appears like bamboo stretching to the sky like a ready flying bird. He has also designed other skyscrapers and buildings such as Tuntex Sky Tower and Chang-Gu World Trade Center. They are two of his satisfactory works.Afer returning to Taiwan, C.Y.Lee started to study Christmas Medicine and Tai Chi Chuan so that he can experience to the spirit of China. Also, he still keeps track of the teacher who expresses philosophy of Confu to cultinative himself extensively. Those are the reasons why he wants to develop his works in Taiwan.

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我已經改過了 自己也看過了= =''

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還有,我駐在桃園= =''

也沒有那麼多錢補習

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  • 2 0 年前
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    Taipei 101 became the tallest building in the world in Dec, 31, 2004.

    In the early 18th century (我有個問題18th century 不是18世紀嗎? 那麼早以前就要蓋喔???), the board of trade planned aggressively to build up the Taipei 101 for the government to attract the foreign company working in Taiwan as a part economic development. The construction of Taipei 101 started since 1998, Jan 31st and finished in 2004, Dec 31st. Now Taipei 101 stands in the eastern side of Taipei.

    Tsu yuan li, the designer of the building, favors the art of the East. He combined his works not only with the culture of the East and also the West. Taipei 101 is considered as one his most brilliant works. When we look of at the facade of Taipei101, it is alike to a bamboo stretching to the sky like a bird that is ready to stretch its wings to the sky. He has also designed other skyscrapers and buildings such as Tuntex Sky Tower and Chang-Gu World Trade Center. These two are his most satisfied works. After returning to Taiwan, C.Y.Lee started to study Christmas Medicine and Tai Chi Chuan so that he can experience to the spirit of China. Also, he still keeps in track of the teacher who expresses philosophy of Confu to cultivate himself extensively. Those are the reasons why he wants to develop his works in Taiwan.

    意見: 你自己先proof read一下再給別人proof read這樣別人才可以比較了解你的文章喔~

    參考資料: me
  • 7 年前

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  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    (The) Taipei 101 became the tallest (highest) building in the world (on) Dec 31, 2004.

    In the early 18th century, the board of trade planned aggressively to build ( ) the Taipei 101 (so that foreign companies were attracted to Taipei and it helped to boom the economy)或 (so as to attract foreigners to invest in order to improve the economy.)

    (It took a really) long time to set up Taipei 101. (The construction started on Jan 13, 1998 and finished on Dec 31, 2004.)

    (And the location of Taipei 101 is in the business at the east area of Taipei.????)>>>( It locates at the east area of Taipei.)

    Tsu yuan li, the Taipei 101 designer, prefers the art of the East (Eastern Arts?). So he combined his works with (Eastern and Western) culture.

    Taipei 101 is a perfect representative work for him. When we take a look of Taipei 101, its facade appears like bamboo stretching to the sky and look like a ready flying bird.

    He has also designed other skyscrapers and buildings such as Tuntex Sky Tower and Chang-Gu World Trade Center which he recognized as satisfactory works.

    After returning to Taiwan, C. Y. Lee started studying Christmas Medicine and Tai Chi Chuan which allow him to experience the spirit of China.

    Also, he still (keeps track of the teacher這句是甚麼意思?) who expresses philosophy of Confu (功夫?martial art) to continuative himself extensively. (These are the reasons why he wants to develop his works in Taiwan.這一句看不到和上文的關係)

    有點亂......

    參考資料: 自己
  • 匿名使用者
    2 0 年前

    took a long time

    NOT 'took long time'!!

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  • Eunice
    Lv 6
    2 0 年前

    so that 刪掉in order to develop economyIt took long time And不要放句首(AND是對等連接詞)你ㄉ文章很口語我能瞭解你想要寫什ㄇ但是有不少小錯誤你要不要自己先檢查一下?

    參考資料: 小小建議---南陽街有很多寫作文法班不賴.可以參考一下
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