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Scrooge is a rich but 小氣 and 刻薄 boss, he didn't let his staff Bob to come off work earlier to celebrate at 平安夜,even called him to come work on Christmas Day.Scrooge's nephew fred invited him to celebrate平安夜 together,but Scrooge refused,When Bob came home,Scrooge wass fell asleep,after woke up,some one who called himself is a Christmas ghost,his purpose was to find Scrooge,he said he's going to bring Scrooge to see how was the Christmas he had been stayed,and help him to keep away from his lives now.Scrooge saw himself and his sister who lived in 孤兒院,but her sister生完小孩Fred就死了then saw Bob's son Tim because not healthy enough need 柺杖to walk,the third is to see two boys are talking,they seem said a man dead and none of his 親戚can 繼承his財產.The last one is Tim dead.When Scrooge woke up he's 慶幸it's a dream,then he got some 啟示,When Bob come to work,he let him to 放一天價and 調漲his投資,then to his nephew's home to celebrate Christmas.

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    Scrooge is a rich but stingy and mean boss, he didn't let his staff Bob to come off work earlier to celebrate at Christmas Eve, even called him to come work on Chritmas Day. Scrooge's nephew fred in vited him to celebrate Christmas Eve together, but Scrooge refused. When Bob came home, Scrooge was fell asleep, after woke up, some one who called himself is a Christmas ghost, his purpose was to find Scrooge, he said he's going to bring Scrooge to see how was the Christmas he had been stayed, and help him to keep away from his lives now Scrooge saw himself and his sister who lived in orphanage, but her sister delivered a child, Fred died, then saw Bob's son Tim because not healthy enough need a stick to walk, the third is to see two boys are talking, they seem said a man dead and none of his relatives can inherit his heritage. The last one is Tim dead. When Scrooge woke up he feels lucky it's a dream, then he got some revelation. When Bob comes to work, he lets him to have a day off and raises his investment, then to his nephew's home to celebrate Christmas.

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