英文 / 請問下列的英文改錯

Question

1. He defeated his opponent, he won the championship.

2. All the students were done their experiments in the lab.

為什麼上列兩個句子是錯的？請問文法哪裡不對？

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可以解釋嗎？

因為你只打正解我也不太了解為什麼會錯

麻煩解釋一下為什麼句子是錯的，謝謝^^

2 個已更新項目:

標點問題？

有標點有差嗎？

Answer 1

最佳解答

1. He defeated his opponent, he won the championship.前後句子不能用逗號連接, 可以用連結詞連接:He defeated his opponent and won the championship.2. All the students were done their experiments in the lab.在此動詞應該為主動式, 而非被動式:All the students did their experiments in the lab.

Answer 2

1.應該是標點問題，有兩種改法

1) He defeated his opponent, and he won the championship

2) He defeated his opponent and won the championship.

另一個小問題是，他真的只有只有一個對手嗎？opponent?opponents?這要根據你的文章內容囉

2.要強調學生"已經"在實驗室完成實驗的話:

1) All the students have done their experiments in the lab.

只是要強調"所有學生"在"實驗室"完成實驗的話:

2) All the students did their experiments in the lab.