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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

特急...修改英文文章...文法錯誤或修辭(贈20點)

急...這是我的英文作業,因為我的文法及修辭不是很好,希望能有高手能幫我修改文章,謝謝!(不過為甚麼直接貼上英文,句尾字會斷字呢?不好意思,雖然看起來有點吃力,辛苦了!)

The Cyclical Nature of Long-term Relationship

There is no one can live without "Love" between man and woman. Everybody is looking for the soulmate in this crazy world. Even if we are lucky to seeing the right person but the most difficult thing is how to move the relationship forward. There are three stages in the love affair cycle: the infatuation stage, the problem stage and the crossroads stage.

At first stage, when we pick-up and click with someone is means we're already irresistible fall in love. At the beginning, the lovers always think about their sweetheart and can't get him or her out of their head. They feel desperately to get closer and they can be catered to all needs from the lover. The couples always want to show the best to each other and everything is perfect and fabulous at this moment.

After the passion, the love affair becomes ordinary and insipid. They also find more important things then romance from the real life. Everything is imperfect anymore and more defects appeared by each day. The couples start to disagree more often because some small problem. Sometimes they even fight as a result of the different habits and misunderstandings.

Finally, they realize and understand that they are match or not through the falling-out. If they pass the problems, they will start to get along well from the first stage again even get married. On the other hand, they will break up that one tired and disappointed to keep the relationship continuing. No matter how painful it may be, we have to come through it because there is no one can make the life story completely without a failure in love.

There are many people in this cycle stare over again and again. Although it's a very hard class in the life, but never give up to love because nobody can get the full marks in this subject and there must be some one right out there for us. Love is the most adventure in the life, but also the most regret if we refuse to love.

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To樓下的這位翻譯大師:我要的不是翻譯喔!這是我自己寫的,難道我會不知道意思嗎?我的標題不夠清楚嗎??傷腦經!

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  • 1 0 年前

    There is no one can live without "Love" between men and women. Everybody is looking for the soulmate in this crazy world. Even if we are lucky to meet the right person, the most difficult thing is how to forther cement the relationship. There are three stages in the love affair cycle; the infatuation stage, the problem stage and the crossroads stage.

    At first stage, when we pick-up and click with someone means we're already fall in love. At the very beginning, the lovers always think about their sweethearts and can't get him or her out of their mind. They feel desperately to get closer, and they can do whatever for their lovers. Besides,the couples always want to show the best side to each other and everything is perfect and fabulous at this moment.

    Passion would fade, and the love affair would become insipid. They would find something more important than the romantic love from the real life. Everything isn't perfect anymore, and more defects would gradually appear between the lovers. The couples have quarrels more often because of some trivial things. Sometimes they even fight due to the different habits and misunderstandings.

    In the third stage, they may realize that if they are compatible or not. If they can overcome the problems, they will start to get along well, and perhaps they may get married. On the other hand, they may feel frustrated of their relationship and decide to break up. No matter how painful it may be, we have to come through it because no one can make the life go smoothly without a failure in love.

    Although it's not easy to contain a relationship, never give up to love because nobody is perfect in this subject, and there must be some one right out there for us. Love is the most exciting adventure in the life, and we will feel regret if we refuse to love.

    參考資料: me
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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    The Cyclic Nature of Long-term Relationships <= sounds very medical

    Your writing does not match this title

    How about

    The Circle of Love

    ======================================================

    Begin with the real subject. Only amateur (meaning 小學 學生) writers begin with "there is/are." Simply begin with love.

    Why is "Love" quoted? For sarcasm?

    Know your articles: "the" and "a."

    Even ..., but ... . <= it's a crime

    Use Mircorsoft words to check your grammatical errors -- about 1 per every ten words.

    It's the 21st Century. Some words have changed their original definitions.

    Gay =/= happy (well, maybe they are happy)

    Fabulous connotes homosexuality

    Excuse me for being rude, if I am. Is this passage about homosexual relationships?

    The subject keeps changing -- one, we, they, etc.

    Classify your subjects and make it more coherent.

    DO NOT TRANSLATE!!!

    If you translate from Mandarin to English, NOBODY WILL UNDERSTAND.

    I simply couldn't understand the latter parts.

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  • 1 0 年前

    長期關係的週期本質 沒有可能居住沒有"愛" 在人和婦女之間。大家尋找soulmate 在這個瘋狂的世界裡。既使我們是幸運的對看合適的人但最困難的事物是怎麼移動關係今後。有三個階段在風流韻事週期: 糊塗階段、問題階段和交叉路階段。在第一階段, 當我們拾起並且點擊與某人是我們已經是在愛的不可抗拒的秋天的手段。在開始, 戀人考慮他們的甜心, 總無法使他或她脫離他們的頭。他們絕望地感覺得到更加接近並且他們可能迎合所有需要從戀人。夫婦總想要顯示最佳互相和一切是完善和美妙的在這片刻。在激情以後, 風流韻事變得普通和索然無味。他們並且發現更加重要的事然後言情從真正的生活。一切再是不完美的並且更多瑕疵出現在□天以前。夫婦開始經常不同意因為某一小問題。有時他們甚而戰鬥由於不同的習性和誤解。終於, 他們意識到和瞭解, 他們是比賽或不是通過下落。如果他們通過問題, 他們將開始得到從第一階段甚而再很好結婚。另一方面, 他們將破壞, 一個疲倦和失望保留關係繼續。無論痛苦它也許是, 我們必須來通過它因為沒有可能完全地做傳記沒有失敗在愛。有再次許多人在這週期凝望結束。雖然這是非常堅硬類在生活中, 但從未授予由愛決定因為沒人得到充分的標記在這個主題和那裡必須是大約一權利那裡為我們。愛是多數冒險在生活中, 而且多數遺憾如果我們拒絕愛。

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