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*My Favorite Book

My favorite books is The White Huge Tower . It was written by a Japanese female writer Yamasaki Toyoko .

The author makes use of the continuous events, making up a huge society structure . People fight for personal gains, the faction partitions . Hospital and hospital fight for resource, the government and the medical treatment system's relationship . Iwas really struck by this story . It tells us the dark side in iatrology word and the medical ethics to a doctor .

Without reading the books, we can get some information from the cover of the books .On book one ,it's a cloudy day ,like the dark side in hospitals . On book two ,the cloud is going to open ,like the big change in iatrology world . And on book three, it's a clean sky of thousands of miles, it means the lead's death let him leave the fight in that word .

White means pure, huge means sublimes . What happen in this tower ? How many tragedies and comedies are played here ? The outside people would never know

*Something I Cherish Most

This is a picture that my sister painted for me . In the picture , the little girl is me . That was a hot summer we went to Green island with our parents . We stayed at a small house near the beach , through the window could see the blue sky and beautiful ocean . In the afternoon we went to the beach . I rolled up my dress and walked in the water . The sun shone on my face . She caught that moment and painted it down .

When I enter the junior high school she gave me this picture . On the picture, she wrote”The scenery at Green island is beautiful and that day she is also beautiful ”.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    *My Favorite Book

    My favorite books is The White Huge Tower . It was written by a Japanese female writer Yamasaki Toyoko .

    The author MADE use of A STRING OF CONNECTED events TO CEATE a huge structure OF SOCIETY. People fight for personal gains, AND SEPERATE INTO DIFFERENT factions. HospitalS fight WITH ONE ANOTHER for resourceS, and for the relationship BETWEEN the government and the medical treatment system. It was ALL FULLY DEPICTED IN this story . It tells us the dark side in [iatrology(這是什麼字?)] world and HOW A DOCTOR VIEWS medical ethics.

    Without reading the books, we can JUST get some SUGGESTIONS from the cover.On Book One, it's a cloudy day, IMPLYING the dark in hospitals . On Book Two, the cloudS ARE DIVIDING, IMPLYING the big change in the [iatrology?] world . And on Book Three, it's a clean sky FOR thousands of miles, WHICH means the leadER's death TAKES him OUT OF the fight OF that world.

    White means pure; huge means sublimITY . What happens in this tower ? How many tragedies and comedies are CAUSED here ? People FROM OUTSIDE WILL never know

    *Something I Cherish Most

    This is a picture that my sister painted for me. In the picture, the little girl is me. That was a hot summer WHEN we went to Green Island with our parents . We stayed at a small house near the beach, AND through the window WE could see the blue sky and THE beautiful ocean. In the afternoon we went to the beach . I rolled up my dress and walked in the water . The sun shone on my face. She caught that moment and painted it down .

    When I enterED junior high school she gave me this picture. On the picture, she wrote DOWN A LINE FOR ME: "The scenery at Green Island THAT DAY WAS beautiful and SO WERE YOU."

    大概是這樣吧 : )

    參考資料: Me
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    1 0 年前

    1不論如何,不要在文章中用問號。把問句改成肯定句。

    2 &quot;Something I Cherish Most&quot; 裡,第一段最後一個she是誰?我猜是你姊,但問題是…很久看到&quot;my sister&quot;了,用代名詞的話,最好整段都是某人某物再接上代名詞,不然容易混淆。

    其他的話剎那答得很好^^

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