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Eddie 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

(英文)英文翻譯哪邊還需要改(急,附贈20點唷)

這是我自己翻譯的,哪邊還需要改一下?附贈20點唷

心得:

金剛這部電影有關翻拍有3次之多(有關之電影更高達近20部)至於最新翻拍的一次是去年2005,導演是彼得傑克森(魔戒的導演),

雖然說這部片已經翻拍很多次,但是這次導演有特別加入之前所沒有的部分,"一場精采刺激的金剛英雄救美女激戰迅猛龍的驚險橋段"

更增加了女主角和金剛之間有更多的感情戲份在,當然...這部強檔好戲我也有去電影院看過,

其中讓我印象最深的除了金剛跑出來跟迅猛龍對吼打敗它外,

另一個就是金剛爬上一座大廈擊垮飛機的那一幕,因為我幼稚園看金剛的時候就是對那一幕最有印象,

另外還有就是因為它爬上那座已經不復在的大廈"雙子星大樓"吧,

話說這部片長達3個小時,目前也還在上映中,這部物超所值的片子,怎能錯過呢

Kingkong has been retook for three times (relevant films are nearly 20

departments up more to even more ) newly turn over to have something

to do

Once is last year2005, director Peter Jackson (Lord of the ring

director),

Though this film has already been retake many times,

but the director has joins some special scene this time, " an exciting

frame"

The kingkong fights the dinosaur to rescues the beauty , it increased

emotional content

between leading lady and Kingknog

I have gone to the cinema to see this good play,

Among those frame which make my impression deepest is the kingkong runs

out roaring with the dinosaur,

Another one is that the kingkong climb up a mansion and crash a plane

That scene, because I had seen it at kindergarten so it made the

impression on me most,

it also get on the lost mansion " World trade twin tower " in addition,

This film is long as 3 hours, still in showing at present, this film

exceeds it's worth, how can we miss it?

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    Kingkong has been retook for three times (relevant films are nearly 20

    departments up more to even more ) newly turn over to have something to do

    ---> there are more than 20 relevant films (have been made)

    ---> the lastes one is published in year 2005

    Once is last year2005, director Peter Jackson (Lord of the ring director),

    --->the director of The Lord of the Ring

    Though this film has already been retake many times,

    ---> already 不是必要的

    but the director has joins some special scenes this time, " an exciting frame"

    --> though and but 不應該同時出現; has put/ has created ; " an exciting frame" 是不需要的因為 你已經說了special scenes

    The kingkong fights the dinosaur to rescues the beauty , it increased emotional content

    between leading lady and Kingknog

    --> King Kong fights the dinosaur to rescue the lady which draw more attention between the leaing female character and King Kong.

    I have gone to the cinema to see this good play,

    -->and of course, I have been this great movie.

    Among those frame which make my impression deepest is the kingkong runs out roaring with the dinosaur,

    ---> Scenes impressed me the most is that King Kong was roaring over the dinosaur and later won over the fight/battle.

    Another one is that the kingkong climb up a mansion and crash a plane.

    --> ...... is that King Kong climbed up .... and crashed ....

    That scene, because I had seen it at kindergarten so it made the impression on me most,

    ---> that scene made a great impression for me when I saw the original KingKong while in kindergarten.

    it also get on the lost mansion " World trade twin tower " in addition,

    --> as well as the World Trade Center which is no longer there.

    This film is long as 3 hours, still in showing at present, this film exceeds it's worth, how can we miss it?

    --> this film is 3 hours long and is still showing/ in the theater. For a film exceeds its worth like King Kong, how can we miss it?

    PS 或許還有一些小地方 我沒有注意到 不過 要多注意 不要 中文式英文歐

    參考資料: 自己
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