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還有外界過度的渲染恐怕更激盪當事人的心情。
And the over exaggerating of the the external world may cause
the mood of the party concerned to more surge.
更新: 還有外界過度的渲染,這比評家審的話更傷人,恐怕更盪當事人的心情。And the over exaggerating of the exteranl world which is more scathing than the judge's comment. May cause the modd of the party concerned to more surge.
更新 2: And the over exaggerating of the exteranl world, which is more scathing than the judge's comment, may cause the mood of the party concerned be come more surge.
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