發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 2 0 年前

請各位英文高手幫我校正看看~~謝謝

Hello!Good afternoon!

It is a pleasure to introduce myself.

My name is CHING-HUI,YU,my friends all called me YO.I come from Taichung.

My majoy is food and beverage manage depatment,because I like to learning everything about food and beverage ,for exemple:cooking,service and manage.

At free time,I usually play pingpong and tennis.

At first,I don't play very well,after friends taught me how to played better and practice for a long time.Finally,I had a few advanced than before.

My friends say I am a easygoing person,but I think I am somewhat on shy side.

It is ture,I have to need more confidence to finish everything

I want to be a smart,outgoing and independent girl.So Iwill Keep on learning new thing to increase my ability and broaden my horizons.

以上是我的自我介紹,我知道很糟,因為我文法真的很遭~"~

請各位英文高手幫我看看,哪裡有錯誤的地方

該怎麼修改比較好~~~

謝謝你們了~~~

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  • 2 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Hello! Good afternoon!

    It is my pleasure to introduce myself.

    My name is CHING-HUI,YU. My friends all call me YO. I come from Taichung.

    I major in food and beverage manage department because I like to learn everything about food and beverage, such as cooking, service and manage.

    In my free time, I usually play pingpong and tennis.

    At first, I didn't play very well. But my friends taught me some tips on how to play and I practiced for a long time. Finally, I have improved a lot.

    My friends say that I am a easygoing person, but I think I am somewhat on shy side.

    It is true because I need more confidence to finish everything

    I want to be a smart, outgoing and independent girl. So I will keep on learning new things to increase my ability and broaden my horizon.

    參考資料: me
  • 2 0 年前

    Hello!Good afternoon!(這兩個選一個就好)

    It is my pleasure to introduce myself.

    My name is CHING-HUI,YU, my friends all called me YO. I come from Taichung.

    I major in Food and Beverage Management. I like to learning everything about food and beverage, such as cooking, service and management.

    In my free time, I enjoy playing pingpong and tennis.

    At the beginning, I didn't play very well. After being taught by my friend and practicing for a long time, finally,I had a few advanced than before.

    My friends said I am a easygoing person, but I think I am a little bit shy.

    It is ture,I need more confidence to finish everything.

    I want to be a smart, outgoing and independent girl, so I will keep learning new things to increase my ability and broaden my view.

  • 2 0 年前

    稱不上英文高手,看了好久才看懂你的意思,但有些部分改了一些詞希望你不要介意。

    Hello! Good afternoon!

    It's my pleasure to intorduce to you.

    My name is Ching-Hui YU. My friends like to call me Yo. I come from Taichung.

    I majored in Food and Beverage Manage Department. I love to learning about food and

    beverage, for example: cooking, service and manage; therefore, I chose this department.

    I like playing pingpong and tennis in my free time. I didn't play it very well in the beginning. I have greatly advanced in it beacuse my friends spent much time to teach me all of things.

    My frineds say that I am an easygoing person, but I think I am a little shy. In fact, I need more confidence to finish everything.

    Finally, I want to be a smart, outgoing, and independent girl in the future; therefore, I will keep on learning new things to increase my ability and broaden my horizons.

    參考資料: 自己
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