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The Hancock Tower in Boston is thin mirror-glass slab that rises almost eight hundred feet. When it was being constructed was when its windows began cracking, and some fell crashing to the ground. In order to minimize risks is why the architects and owners replaced over a third the huge windows with plywood until the problem could be found and solved. With its plywood sheath, the building was homelier than any other skyscraper, the butt of many jokes. Eventually, however, it was discovered that the reason the windows cracked was because joint between the double panes of glass was too rigid. The solution of thicker single-pane windows was in stalled, and the silly plywood building crystallized into reflective jewel.

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    The Hankcock Tower is a thin slab of mirror-glass architecture that rises almost eight hundred feet in Boston. 或是 The Hankcock Tower is an almost eight hundred feet thin slab of mirror-glass architecture in Boston.

    When it was under constructed, its windows began cracking and some of them fell and crashed to the ground. Therefore, in order to minimize the risks, the architects and owners replaced the third huge windows with a plywood until the problem could be found and solved. With its plywood sheath, it became the butt of many jokes and was homelier than any other skyscraper. However, the reason, which the windows cracked was because of the joint between the double panes of glass was too rigid, was discovered eventually. The solution to the problem was to install a thicker single-pane windows; of course, the silly playwood building was crystallized into a reflective jewel.

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