寶寶 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我看看英文文章(文法對不對)急~謝謝4

The basketball, i want to introduce it. I think it's good sport that

everyone can playtogether.First you need a basketball, you have to do,just

shoot it to the hoop,and you can get a point.And you need a pair of

basketball shoes,that you can running on the basketball ground. The rule

very easy , i supply some, first you can't use your foot to kick ball,second

you can't hit other's hand ,third ever game have

a time, when it over the point you got most you were winner in this game.

(如果可以的話 幫我修改 謝謝)

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  • Mr.尤
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    I want to introduce the basketball.

    In my opinion, it's a good sport that everyone can play together.

    First, you need a basketball and all you have to do is just shooting it in the hoop.

    At the same time, you can get a point.

    In addition, you need a pair of basketball shoes so that you can run fast on the ground.

    The rule of the basketball is very easy.

    For example, you shouldn't let your foot kick the ball.

    In addition, you shouldn't pull other's hand.

    Finally, there is a time restrictions in ever game.

    When the time is up,the point you get most is a winner in this game.

    改的差不多了 參考看看吧 下次點數可以考慮給多一點

    不然很少人會有意願想幫你喔︿︿

    參考資料: 自己改的
  • helen
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    mr 尤 改得好

    那些不會英文的只會用good

    哈哈

  • Ming
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    1. 有些i要大寫

    2. I think it's good sport it's good sport 應該要加a 雖然運動是不可數 但他是一項籃球運動

    3. ,you have to do,just 這裡用than you just have to shoot it to the hoop應該比較順

    4. And you need 前面用In addition,(此外)應該會更好

    5. rule不是要加is嗎? 還是不用? 自己看看吧

    6. easy , i 這用句號較合適吧~

    以上幾點看看唄~

    要是我有錯就拍謝囉^^"(不會吧~)

    參考資料: Just try it !!
  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    只有I要大寫

    i want to introduce it

    i supply some

    其他都對~~

    GOOD

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