訂正中翻英-粉紅高跟鞋

Question

今天，我和姊姊來到一間鞋店。我看見她正試穿一雙粉紅高跟鞋。「拜託，妳為什麼不試穿別雙呢？」我說道。但她沒有說什麼。我對她的沈默感到不解並將頭轉向她。著實嚇了我一大跳。這女人是誰啊？我向她道歉並立刻跑出鞋店。

My sister and I went to a shoes store today. I saw she was tried on a pair of pink high-heeled shoes.

\"Come on, why don\'t you try on another one?\" I said.

She didn\'t say anything. I wonder at her silence and turned my head to face her.

That\'s really scary! Who is she? I asked for her apologize and left the store right away.

Answer 1

最佳解答

My sister and I came to a shoe store today. I saw she was trying on a pair of pink high-heeled shoes.

"Come on! Why don't you try on another pair?" I said.

She said nothing. I wondered at her silence and turned my head around. I was astonished. Who is the woman? I apologized to her and rushed out of the shoe store right away.

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Answer 2

I saw she was tried on a pair of pink high-heeled shoes.

------>I saw ~her trying~ on a pair of pink high-heeled shoes.

I wonder at her silence and turned my head to face her.

------>I ~wondered~ at her silence and turned my head to face her.

That's really scary! Who is she?

------->That ~was~ really scary! Who ~was~ she?

I asked for her apologize and left the store right away.

-------> I ~apologized to her~ and left the store right away.

我把有錯的句子抓出來訂正了^__^,錯的地方我有用~ ~框起來了

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