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關於英文 哪邊有錯誤?

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My name is Yvonne, I come from keelung and I am 16 years old this year.

There are four people in my family. father, mother and an elder sister. I love

them very much because they are very kind to me. When I feel sad they will comfort me, give me some opinion, make me happy. I am thankful I have a wonderful family.

My hoppies are playing basketball, surfing the internet, seeing movies and reading. I am good at sports. Every now and then I like go to play basketball with my friends. I feel good when I am playing basketball. that will solve my pressure. Sometimes I feel bored. I usually kill time by surfing the internet and seeing movies, besides, I like reading also.beacause reading increases my knowledge

I am a high school student. Now I am used to everything in my school. When I came to XXX School, I didn’t have any friends here. I was so lucky I met all our classmates. They are so nice to me.I am so happy every day

I hopo I can do well in my studies, but I am not good at English and Math. that’s too difficult for me. I think I can do it well, but I fool around too much. I don’t want to give up myself. I will take pains with my studies.

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    My name is Yvonne, I come from keelung and I am 16 years old this year.

    *My name is Yvonne, I come from keelung, and I am going to sixteen this year.

    There are four people in my family. father, mother and an elder sister.

    *There are four people in my family including father, mother and an elder sister.

    I lovethem very much because they are very kind to me.

    *(correct)

    When I feel sad they will comfort me, give me some opinion, make me happy. I am thankful I have a wonderful family.

    *When I feel sad they always encourage me, give me some opinion and make me happy. I appreciate thatI have such a wonderful family.

    My hoppies are playing basketball, surfing the internet, seeing movies and reading.

    *i have many hobbits, such as play basketball, surf on the internet, see movies and read some books.

    I am good at sports. Every now and then I like go to play basketball with my friends.

    *I am good in sports, and I also like to play basketball with my friends.

    *I always feel good when I play basketball because i can get rid of stress in my daily life

    *if I feel bored, I will surf on the internet, see movies to kill my time.Besides, I like reading and i think it's the best way for me to increase my knowledge

    I am a high school student.

    *(correct)

    *Now I like to do everything in my school.

    *when i first time xxx school, i don't have any friends here.

    *fortunately,i have nice classmates, they treat me well so i am happy every day.

    *i hope i can do well both in my english and math.

    *they are too difficult to me.

    *i always fool around. i know i can do it well and i don't want to give myself up. in short, i will study hard.

    參考資料: me(study in new york)
  • 1 0 年前

    (最佳解答)第12行第4個字錯了 hobbits應改為hobbies

  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    My name is Yvonne, I come from keelung and I am 16 years old this year.

    this year 不用加 加了反而是種中式口語化了

    There are four people in my family. father, mother and an elder sister.

    應該是There are four people in my family, father, mother, an elder sister, and me.

    When I feel sad they will comfort me, give me some opinion, make me happy. I am thankful I have a wonderful family.

    同樣 When I feel sad they will comfort me, give me some opinions(advices), and make me happy. I am thankful that I have a wonderful family.

    hobby嗜好

    release pressure比較好吧

    besides, I like reading also 用 I like reading, too.比較好吧

    not good at English and Math應該用 in吧

    that’s too difficult for me.怪怪的 That's difficult for me to study. or That's difficult to me.

    take pains 不大懂這個片語耶

    就以上

    參考資料: 個人看法
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