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會英文的..幫幫忙吧!!修改英文自傳文法&內容~~急急急

各位會英文ㄉ請幫我修改ㄅ!!

因為我文法不行~~這些都是我用網站翻ㄉ~~

很像很多錯誤耶~~~所以請大家幫幫忙吧!!(第2段)

   At the age of six I attended ╳╳ Primary School where I learned the Fundamentals of knowledge. I also learned something out side the text book. Studies five and sixth grades to start since childhood, the parents on deliver me and the younger brother the child English class to study, as soon as starts very to be really difficult to accept, but because attends class the way with ease to be amusing Plays the game the way to study English. Gradually has the interest to English then earnest study. Therefore gradually has the interest to English then earnest to study. In addition mother the position has let me facilitate the study therefore let me study the bead to do mental arithmetic. Also should my interest let me study one after another paints pictures, the piano and clarinet. Upon graduation from the Primary School I was assigned to ╳╳ Junior High School. Because of myself has studied the piano and clarinet therefore on is divided the Orchestra Class. Frequently participated competes and performs also all obtained the good appraisal and the result. In addition I also have the quite big interest to the arts aspect. Also once attended the World School Children’s Art Exhibition obtained the excellent work of engraving. Three years later, I became a student of ╳╳ High School. I chose have gone study using the English Department. For three years school life extremely substantial and is joyful. Schoolmates learned how to share the happiness and sorrow, and learned how to be friendly towards one anther. The teachers not only taught us knowledge and skills but also taught us how to think independently. Besides, I passed many certifications held to determine the qualifications, such as General English Proficiency Test Level Primary, Trade English Examination Level 3&4, Accountant Technique Test Level C…and so on. I had an abundant high school life.

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6歲時,我進入╳╳國小就讀,在此學到基本的知識,也學到了書本以外的事物。從小學五六年級開始,父母就將我和弟弟送到兒童美語班學習。一開始針的很難接受,但因為上課方式輕鬆好玩,以玩遊戲的方式來學習英文,漸漸的對英文產生興趣,進而認真學習。除此之外,父母為了讓我更容易的理解數學所以送我去學習珠心算,並且在我的要求之下也讓我學習了繪畫、鋼琴和豎笛。

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小學畢業後,我被分發至╳╳國中。由於我本身會鋼琴和豎笛的緣故,我被分進了學校的樂隊班就讀。

又因為本身底子不錯,所以就被同學和老師們選為管樂團的團長。我們也常常去參加比賽和到附近表演,都得到了蠻好的成績和評價。此外,我對藝術方面也有著極大的興趣。在老師的教導和鼓勵下,參加世界兒童畫展,也得到版畫組的佳作。

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三年後,我成了╳╳高級中學的學生,我選擇了應用英文科。三年的學校生活非常豐富和快樂。同學們了解如何分擔快樂和憂愁,老師不僅教了我們知識和技能而且教我們怎麼獨立地認為。此外, 我通過了許多能力檢定,,諸如全民英檢初級、 商業英檢3&4級, 會計丙級... 等等。我有個充實的高中生活。

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大致上的翻譯就降了。請大家多多忙,我一定深深深深的感謝大家ㄉ。。。

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    我覺得你附上中文大家才看得懂翻譯軟體怎麼翻的吧~~~從錯誤的英文猜你原中文要表達的意思,太難了吧~~

    2006-02-20 11:03:32 補充:

    When I was 6, I studied in ╳╳ Primary School. Here I learned the fundamentals and also knew something out of the textbook. When I was 5th grade,my parents took my younger brother and me to the English cream school(補習班). At first(一開始,最初), it's hard to adapt(習慣), little by little,I found the way teacher taught was very funny and easy. They taught the new lessons by playing games, owing this point cause me get interested in learning English. Further, I studied English much harder than before. Besides,my parents sent me to learn mental arithmetic(心算) in order to make me understand Math much easier. And with my request, they let me learn playing the piano, drawing and clarinet.

    After graduated from XX Primary shcool, I was assigned to ╳╳ Junior High School. Because I knew how to play the piano and clarinet, I was selected to the Orchestra Class.

    Due to my ability of instrument is not bad, I was chosen as a leader of this class by my teachers and classmates. We usually competed the competition and performed near our school. We obtained good appraisal and results as well. Additionally, I also had great interests in art. Owing to my teacher's teaching and inspiring ,I took part in World School Children's Art Exhibition, and I won (佳作) of the engraving.

    After three years, I became a student of ╳╳ High School. I chose(應用英文科). My school life is extremely substantial and joyful of these three years. My classmates and I learned how to share happiness and sadness and to be friendly toward from one another. My teachers not only taught us knowledge and skills but also taught us how to think independently. Hence(因此), I've passed many certifications, such as GEPT (General English Proficiency Test) Level Primary, Trade English Examination Level 3&4, Accountant Technique Test Level C…and so on. My high school life is quite abundant.

    2006-02-21 03:06:34 補充:

    大改嚕~~~但我知道不一定是最好的版本有2個括弧內中文意思是要你自己去找唷,( 應用英文/佳作)因為我覺得你會比我更知道英文是什麼才對~呼~~改得好累~

    參考資料: poor me
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