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請幫我訂正英文吧!!

請幫我訂正英文吧!! 後面那括號裡的中文, 是我真正想要表達的意思, 可是我不知道我的英文的意思對不對?! 幫我訂正及修改成正確的英文吧!! 或是說修改成更正式、更完美的用法!!

Hi:

I want to apply the DBA of UNVA, and I have a lot questions: (Hi, 我想要申請UNVA的企管博士, 我有一些問題想要請教你們: )

1. Why can not searching information of DBA in website of UNVA? (為什麼沒辦法在UNVA的網站裡找到DBA 的資訊呢?)

2. Have DBA of UNVA was admitted in U.S? (UNVA的企管博士有沒有被美國承認呢?)

3. What are organizations admit DBA of UNVA? (有哪些機構承認UNVA的企管博士呢?)

4. Have DBA of UNVA was admitted in Taiwan, too? (台灣也有承認UNVA的企管博士嗎?)

5. What is deadline to apply for DBA in Sept. Fall 2006? (2006年DBA九月秋季班什麼時候截止日期呢? )

6. How to apply DBA of UNVA? (要如何申請UNVA的企管博士呢?)

7. What are the conditions to apply DBA of UNVA? (要有什麼樣的條件去申請UNVA的企管博士呢?)

8. If I study in UNVA, can I apply teaching assistant in the UNVA? (如果我在UNVA唸書, 我可以申請UNVA的助教嗎?)

9. What are the conditions to apply teaching assistant? (申請助教的條件是什麼呢?)

10. If I graduated in UNVA, can I work in U.S? (如果我從UNVA畢業, 我可以在美國工作嗎?)

11. How many types of dorm of UNVA? (UNVA有幾種宿舍類型呢?) How much about each type of dorms on a term or a year? (每學期或每年的每一種類型的宿舍差不多是多少錢?)

12. Could you send me a general regulation or introduction of UNVA and all information about DBA? (可以寄UNVA的簡章或介紹及DBA的資訊給我嗎?) I want to know more details. (我想要知道更加的仔細!) this is my address: XXXXXXX (以下是我的住址: XXXXXXX)

***DBA 是Doctor of Business Administration企管博士, UNVA 是University of Northern Virginia

Thank you! God bless you!

P.s 請勿用軟體隨便敷衍

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  • 2 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Hi:

    通常會說 Dear Sir/Madam: 如果你不知道對方性別的話

    (Hi, 我想要申請UNVA的企管博士, 我有一些問題想要請教你們: )

    I would like to apply for the DBA program at your school, and I have some questions.

    (a lot 可能會嚇到別人)

    (為什麼沒辦法在UNVA的網站裡找到DBA 的資訊呢?)

    1. How may I find out relevant information about the DBA program in your school website?

    (UNVA的企管博士有沒有被美國承認呢?)

    2. Is the DBA program of UNVA an US accredited program recognized nationwide?

    (有哪些機構承認UNVA的企管博士呢?)

    3. Which organizations recognize or the DBA graduates of UNVA or issued the accreditation?

    (台灣也有承認UNVA的企管博士嗎?)

    4. Is the DBA degree recognized in Taiwan, too?

    (2006年DBA九月秋季班什麼時候截止日期呢? )

    5. What is the deadline for applying for the DBA program for the fall semester this year?(2006)

    (要如何申請UNVA的企管博士呢?)

    6. How to apply for the UNVA DBA program?

    (要有什麼樣的條件去申請UNVA的企管博士呢?)

    7. What are the requirements for applying the UNVA DBA program?

    (如果我在UNVA唸書, 我可以申請UNVA的助教嗎?)

    8. May I apply for a teaching assistant position in UNVA once I become a student in UNVA?

    (申請助教的條件是什麼呢?)

    What are the requirements for applying for a teaching assistant?

    (如果我從UNVA畢業, 我可以在美國工作嗎?)

    10. How may I work in the U.S. after I graduate from UNVA?

    (UNVA有幾種宿舍類型呢?) (每學期或每年的每一種類型的宿舍差不多是多少錢?)

    11. What kind of dorms are available there for a foreign student to live in on campus? How much per semester does it cost to live at a dorm?

    (可以寄UNVA的簡章或介紹及DBA的資訊給我嗎?) (我想要知道更加的仔細!) (以下是我的住址: XXXXXXX)

    12. Would you please mail me over the introduction material of the UNVA campus and the DBA program and application forms? I am really interested in the program and would like to know more details about it.

    Here is my address:

    XXXXXXX

    ***DBA 是Doctor of Business Administration企管博士, UNVA 是University of Northern Virginia

    Thank you! God bless you!

    祝你好運

    2006-02-13 23:51:27 補充:

    在台灣時可以盡量多看句型文法的書

    同時多讀簡易的原文書

    出國後可以去ESL拿課或旁聽

    寫完後多去請別人幫你改

    盡量問問題

    你博士唸完應該就差不多了

    參考資料: Tate
  • 2 0 年前

    tsmart:

    我的寫作真的很差, 可是我真的不知道如何加強, 更何況我以後要寫論文, 想到就頭大!!

    不知道你有什麼樣的意見或方法?

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