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麻煩幫我看看英文自傳~~哪裡有錯誤要改>”< 3Q

麻煩各位英文強的大大~~本人英文實在不好!!拜託幫我看看哪裡有錯><\"感激不盡PS.我有些是用翻譯來的@@(汗)

(一)My name isXXX, I was born in the enrich to contain abundant cultural Taichung on February 19th in 1988.There are five people in my family, father, mother, younger brother, younger sister and I. My father originally is a successful businessman. But several years ago, he took place the graveness traffic accident. As it does also lost the work ability,at present the center burden all bears by mother. My mother originally is a traditional housewife, after the bitter experience father’s accident, mother not only does not lower the head to the destiny. Instead, mother suffers more hardships because she has to take over my father\'s duties for us. She work hard to support the family and give us ,give warmth and happiness, and comforts us when we feel frustranted.

Therefore my family don’t have to surrender to adversity and calamity. Instead we believe strength, perseverance can overcome any hardship. I am proud of my mother and my family.

(二)Studying is people acculturation necessarily after of journey, and having to first essentials owning inside of morals standard, the foundation consciousness, just have already accepted the possibility of the work. Therefore, I adhere strictly to the student\'s duty, attending to fundamentals to steadily and surely pursue the new information, is very vacant to the future before, so in delving into the knowledge also uninterested, afterwards through the words that an astute teacher relates, I found out keep on to the motive that learns, even determined the future direction. Remember the grade three elective, I chose the curriculum \" the business modernization\".

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(二)第二段後半部,字數有限制>"<

Also therefore this curriculum, opened my financial interest in finance. In spite of is a stock market change, stock, futures, throw the letter, insurance...etc., all deeply attracted me.

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The Warren Buffett that among them calls by having beautiful a God again lets most me thinks further inquire into. Three years in the XXX High School was the most worthwhile and happiest time in my adolescence.

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During that time I made friends with several classmates with whom we shared the same ambition and purpose. They gave me a passed certifications and got those certificates, such as Accounting Technique Level C, Accounting ability level 3, English ability level 4, Chinese Typing……and so on.

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(一)我的名子叫XXX。在1988.2.19出生於富含豐富文化的台中,我家有五個人,父親、母親

、弟弟、妹妹及我。我的父親原本是位成功的商人,但在幾年前,發生了一場重大的交通

事故,也因此喪失了謀生(工作)能力,目前家中的重擔都由母親一人擔起。母親原本是位傳

統的家庭主婦,在遭逢父親的變故後,母親不僅不向命運低頭,反而還身兼父職承受更多的

辛勞,她努力工作養家且給予我們最好的教育,細心照顧我們,給我們溫暖和快樂。

因此我們全家不向困厄不幸低頭,因為我們相信不屈不撓、堅持不懈的態度能克服任何逆境。

我以我的母親及家人為傲。

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(二)(二)

讀書是人們社會化必經的路途,而必須先要擁有內在的道德規範、基礎知能後,

才有接納工作的可能。因此,我謹守學生的本分,務本踏實地追求新知,

以前對於未來十分茫然,因此在鑽研知識上並不感興趣,後來經過一位英明的老師講述的話語

,我找到了持續向學的動力,更堅定了未來的方向。高中三年級的選修課,

我選擇了"企業現代化"來作為我的選修課程,也因為這門學科,

開啟了我對財務金融系的興趣。不管是股市變動,股票,投信,保險...等,都深深吸引了我。

而其中最讓我想更深入去了解的就是有股神美稱的Warren Buffett 。

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在XXXX的三年是我青少年時期最有意義,最快樂的時光。我交了一些志同道合的朋友。

在我家庭遭遇不幸時給我很大的鼓勵。同時我通過多項檢定並取得合格證書,諸如...。

我有個充實的高中生活。

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    可以麻煩你把原本的中文也放上來嗎? 這樣會比較好改正

    2006-02-15 05:03:52 補充:

    (一)

    My name is XXX. I was born in 19th of February 1988 in Tai Chung, the city that is rich in culture. There are five people in my family, father, mother, younger brother, younger sister and I. My father was a successful businessman before he lost his working ability during a serious traffic accident. Currently my mother shouldered all the responsibility in the family. My mother was a traditional housewife. After my father’s accident, not only did she not yield to the crucial fate, she endured even more hardship by taking up my father’s responsibility. She worked very hard to provide us with daily necessities, the best education and well care in addition to the warmth and happiness surrounding us. Thus our family does not yield to the adversities because we believe that a persistent attitude can conquer and difficulty. I am proud of my mother and my family members.

    (二) Education is a necessary step people must travel through during the journey to civilization. One has to possess fundamental morality and basic knowledge before accepting any positions. Therefore, I follow the duty as a student which is to pursue new knowledge. I was once unsure about my future so I did not have great interest in studying. After hearing a wise teacher’s speech, I found the motives to continue my education as well as the future direction. In the third year of senior high school, I chose “Industrial modernization” as the elective subject. This elective inspired my interest to finance and economics. Things including stock market, trusts, insurance and so on all deeply attract me. Among all these, the one thing that appeals to me the most is the so called “God of Stock Market, Warren Buffett.

    2006-02-15 21:04:27 補充:

    (二)後半部 The three years in XXXX is the most meaningful and the happiest time in my teenage time. I have made some friends with similar interests.

    2006-02-15 21:05:34 補充:

    字數限制...剩下的在這裡

    They gave me a lot of encouragement when my family endured the unfortunate incident. At the same time, I have passed various tests and gained certifications such as…. I have had a worthwhile high school life.

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