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Most people like to go shopping in a mall on the weekend. I think there are four reasons. First, you can buy anything you want in there, for example, clothes, furniture, articles for daily use...etc. Second, it\'s very convenient to get there and parking spaces are free. Third, if you are hungry, you can also eat something there. Fourth, people at all the age can go there. So, shopping mall is a very good place for everybody.
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- 2 0 年前最佳解答
1. on the weekend: on weekends
2. anything you want in there, for example, clothes, furniture, articles for daily use...etc. : anything you want there; for example, clothes, furniture, articles for daily use, etc.
3. parking spaces are free: parking spaces are available.
4. people at all the age: people of all age
2006-02-19 23:15:17 補充：
In my opinion, most people like to go shopping in a mall on weekends due to four main reasons. First, you can buy anything you want there; for example, daily necessities like clothes, furniture, articles can be easily found.
2006-02-19 23:15:57 補充：
Second, since parking spaces are always available, it is very convenient for people who drive a vehicle.
2006-02-19 23:16:26 補充：
Third, if you find yourself feeling hungry after a shopping spree, you can simply dine in the mall. Last but not least, a mall has something for everyone; people of all age can enjoy this shopping paradise.
2006-02-19 23:17:05 補充：
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Most people like going shopping in a mall on the weekend. I think there are four reasons. First, you can buy anything you want there.For example, such as clothes, furnitures, articles for daily use...etc. Secondly, it's very convenient to arrive there and provide free parking lots. Thirdlly, if you are hungry, you can also eat something there. Lastly, people at all ages can go there. So, a shopping mall is a very good place for everybody.
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