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訂正英文短文[檢定考試]

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I had a test tomorrow. No one would bring me there so I have to depend on myself. Last afternoon, I rode Taichung on my motorcycle. I have no sense of direction. I spent almost 3 hours to get there.

However, on my way home, I got lost again! And two policemen stopped me and said, \"You didn\'t obey 2-point left turn.\" At the point, I almost burst into tears, \"Sir, I promise I won\'t break the traffic rules again. I\'m lost. I\'m new here. I don\'t have any clue. Can you tell me where it is?\" I said. \"What then? What is the relationship between you break the rules and get lost?\" the older one said coldly.

The other one finally let me go and tell me where the school located.

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我明天有一個檢定考試。由於沒有人可以載我去考試,所以我只好靠自己了。昨天下午我騎機車到台中,我是個路痴,花了將近三個小時才找到考場。

然而,我回家的時候又迷路了。有兩個警察將我攔下來,告訴我︰「你剛才沒有兩段式左轉喔。」那時候,我嚇得都快哭出來了,「我保證下次不會再犯了。我迷路了,我第一次來台中,我什麼都不知道,你能不能告訴我這裡是哪裡?」我說道。「那又怎樣?你違規和迷路有什麼關係嗎?」一個較年長的警察冷冷地說。

最後,另一個警察放我一馬,並且告訴我那所學校怎麼走。

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  • 2 0 年前
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    I have a test tomorrow; but since no one would bring me there, I had to depend on myself. Yesterday, I rode to Taichung on my motorcycle. Being a person with no sense of direction, I spent almost 3 hours to get there.

    However, on my way home, I got lost again! Two policemen stopped me on the road and said bitterly, "You did not obey the 2-point left turn." At this point, I was at the verge of crying, "Sir, I promise I will not break the traffic rules again. I'm lost, I'm new here, so I don't have a clue about where I am or how I am gonna get home. Can you do me a favor and tell me where I am?" I said. "What does that have to do with us? You being lost has nothing to do with you not following the traffic rules?" the older one said coldly.

    In the end, the other police man finally let me go and told me where the school is located.

    參考資料: me :)
  • 2 0 年前

    1.test=>小考 一般大考應用examination這個字

    2.so 或許你可以改用because來呈現這個句子=>I have to go to the examination room by myself, because no one can take me to there.

    3.rode...on my 大錯特錯= = 沒有人這樣說的...管它騎什麼東西 ride的用法都是一樣的... 所以應該是 I rode my scooter to Taichung.

    4.I have no.. 忘了用過去式

    5.2-point"s".. 兩段式左轉應該有正式的英文名稱 這應該是交通法規上的專有名詞 你該去查查看?

    6.burst 忘了用過去式

    7.I don't have.. 這段話加得怪怪的? 或許你應該說 I don't know where I am

    8.What then 可以再說得冷一點 "Then?" 或者 "So what?"

    9.relationship 正常來說= =" 它們不會有 relationship 你該試試別的寫法

    10.結尾...你或許可以這樣開頭 Finally,.. After all,...

    11.and tell.. 忘了用過去式

    參考資料: 某某聰明的人
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