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各位英文達人,可以幫我修改一段句子嗎

Computers make it easy for people nowadays to search the information what they want, and people can regard surfing the Internet as a form of recreation. It is evident that more and more people accessing information by going on the Net and they can gain more extensive knowledge from it as well. At some aspects, a computer function as a virtual library and computers make students’ studies easier and more interesting. For example, students can get the news about sport on BCC SPORT and gain knowledge about fine art on the web site of The Metropolitan Museum of Art. As a result, it is important for people today to spend their time surfing the Internet to keep abreast of the times. In my opinion, computers would be the great teacher if we use them correctly and efficiently.

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    Computers make it easy for people nowadays to search the information what they want, and people can regard surfing the Internet as a form of recreation.

    電腦讓現代人更容易找到他們想找到的資訊,人們也把上網當成休閒活動的一種。

    It is evident that more and more people accessing information by going on the Net and they can gain more extensive knowledge from it as well.

    很明顯的,現在有越來越多人利用網路找尋資科,他們也因此穫得許多更寬闊的知識。

    At some aspects, a computer function as a virtual library and computers make students’ studies easier and more interesting.

    在一些方面,電腦好像是個視覺圖書館,電腦也讓學生的學習更容易和有趣。

    For example, students can get the news about sport on BCC SPORT and gain knowledge about fine art on the web site of The Metropolitan Museum of Art.

    例如,學生們可在 BCC SPORT (BB C 運動)這個網站上得知運動相關的消息,也可以在 The Metropolitan Museum of Art (都會藝術博物館)這個網站找到許多有關優質藝術的相關知識。

    As a result, it is important for people today to spend their time surfing the Internet to keep abreast of the times. In my opinion, computers would be the great teacher if we use them correctly and efficiently.

    結論是,讓人們利用時間上網具有其重要性。就我的看法,電腦也可以是個良師,如果我們能夠有效且正確地運用電腦的話

    ** 以上是英翻中。

    ** 英文修改的地方 (這段小文章寫得很好,段落也很清楚,要改得實在不多,如果真的要在雞蛋上挑骨頭的話,只有以下幾個地方)

    Computers make it easy for people nowadays to search the information what they want

    * Computers make it easy for people nowadays to search the information they want

    accessing information by going on the Net

    * going on line 比較合適。

    students can get the news about sport on BCC SPORT and gain knowledge about fine art on the web site of The Metropolitan Museum of Art.

    * students can not only read the news about sport on BCC Sport but also gain knowledge about fine art on the web site of The Metropolitan Museum of Art.

    參考資料: 個人意見
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