Pete 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

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i want to be a singer.

我想當一位歌手

Sings the pleasant to hear song,

唱出好聽的歌

Sings sells the song which the person relaxes,

唱出讓人放鬆的歌

Let the person liberate from the ordinary working pressure,

讓人從平常的工作壓力被解放

When my worry time sings, lets in my heart do the strange small devil to vanish,

當我煩惱時候唱唱歌,讓我心中搞怪的小惡魔消失

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    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    如果是一篇文章的話

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    I want to be a singer, to sing the songs that is good to hear, to sing the songs that can relax people, let the people liberate from the pressure of ordinary working. Whenever I

    get in a fret, I sing to vanish the little devil playing tricks in my heart.

  • 1 0 年前

    應該是Sing songs "that are"pleasant to hear!

  • 1 0 年前

    1. I want ot be a singer. 正確!

    2. 正確版: Sing songs which is pleasant to hear.

    3. 正確版: Sing relaxing songs.

    4. 正確版: Set people free from the ordinarywork pressure.

    5. 正確版: When I am worried about something、I sing to make the naughty small devil in my mind vanish.

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