呼拉魚 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請各位高手們幫我看一下英文自傳??

這類問題可能高手們已經看過很多次了,但無奈自己英文程度不好,只能靠大家指點混口飯吃,希望各位大大不吝指教,告訴我那邊還需要修改或者是根本就看不懂的,在此先謝過大家!

My name is Pauline Pan and come from Kaohsiung. I graduated from National Kaoshung First University of Science and Technology in 2005, accompanied with a Master’s degree of Logistics Management. In regard to my family condition, my family consists of my father, mother, brother and sister. My father owns a watch store. My mother is housewife. My brother and sister are students.

As to my personality, I think I am outgoing, easygoing and cheerful. I always look things on the bright side and have a strong sense of responsibility. I regard myself as an open-minded person, who can communicate with other people very well.

In leisure time, I like going to the movies and reading. It makes my life to be full of substantial.

In college, I majored in statistics, so I contacted with many statistical software, such as spss, statistica,…etc. In my master program, I learn management and development my communication and presentation. Also I learn how to solve complex problems systematically.I hope I can bring what I’ve learned into full play here, and be a good quality expert. I also wish yours company that can provides me opportunity to show my ability.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    My name is Pauline Pan, coming from Kaohsiung. I graduated from National Kaoshung First University of Science and Technology in 2005, accompanied with a Master’s degree of Logistics Management. There are five members in my family, my father, mother, brother, sister and I. My father owns a watch store repairing and mongering. My mother is a good and wise housewife. As for my brother and sister, they are both students in high school.(請根據你的情況再自行修改)

    As to my personality, I am an outgoing, easygoing, cheerful and optimist person. I always look things on the bright side and have a strong sense of responsibility. I regard myself as an open-minded, communicative person that I can get along with friends.

    In leisure time, I like to see the movies and read books or magazings. It makes my life full of substance and abundance.

    In college, my major was statistics so I contacted with many informations about statistical softwares, such as spss, statistica,…etc. In my master program, I not only learned about management, developing my communication and presentation but also learned how to solve complex problems systematically. I hope I can bring what I’ve learned into full play here, and be a good quality expert. I also wish your company can give me an opportunity to show my ability.

    建議:專長還是要多寫並清楚表示之,若有發表研究論文最好也跟著寫。面試的時候,會根據自傳問更深入的問題。如:你說你很健談,是怎麼的健談? 是什麼都說嗎? 或 你所學的,如果用在我的公司,還有什麼可發揮的地方? 等很多可能會讓你啞口無言的問題。

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  • 1 0 年前

    In regard to my family condition, my family consists of my father, mother, brother and sister. My father owns a watch store. My mother is housewife. My brother and sister are students. 寫給公司的? Runs in family!? 你這邊滿怪的....你不能在最後在寫對那間公司能讓你表現你的能力,還有最重要的是你要寫你能對能對那間公司有什麼.不要寫跟公司沒關的...(外國的這樣吧- -)

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