我的英語作文~請高手幫忙

這是我的英語作文 第一次寫 寫的很破 但也花了我2小時多 沒辦法 因為我才國一 但算拿來唸的 看哪位高手可以幫忙訂正一下我的錯誤 或修一下文意 謝謝~no盜文 At the school.my favorite class is Association Activity.why? because It has the challenge and funny.i like new things and try it. this class is Specially.so deep Affects to me. The knowledge is endless.The relative pressure also is... 顯示更多 這是我的英語作文 第一次寫 寫的很破 但也花了我2小時多 沒辦法 因為我才國一 但算拿來唸的 看哪位高手可以幫忙訂正一下我的錯誤 或修一下文意 謝謝~no盜文

At the school.my favorite class is Association Activity.why? because It has the challenge and funny.i like new things and try it. this class is Specially.so deep Affects to me.

The knowledge is endless.The relative pressure also is big.the word.In music domain,I realize the means.My Association Activity is wind band of ZHONG XING,
Is very famous in the Taoyuan,But the very few people knew hard.
I am flutistin the band.I very happily have this chance.I am very treasure even thoug very hard. but i will away arduously,Each class All let me learn to New knowledge.Study is good.plenitude our life.
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