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訂正英日記(文法)-兩個瘋女人

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I saw two women at the entrance gate. They look older than their real age.

These two ugly women made big noise;

however, they didn\'t notice that they\'ve bothered other people

without self-awareness. They criticize other people\'s dress style, hairdo,

and appearance, and so on.

They think that they are the most perfect, the most beautiful women in the world.

Oh, they must nerve look at themselves in the mirror.

Later, some policemen came and caught them to the nuthouse.

Everyone gave the policemen a clap.

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    I saw two women at the entrance gate. They look older than their actual ages.

    These two ugly women made loud noise; however, they did'nt notice that they've disturbed other people. They criticized each other's dress, hair style, appearance, and so on.

    Both of them think of themselves as the perfect, and the most beautiful woman in the world.

    Oh, they must never looked at themselves in the mirror!

    Later, a policeman came and sent them to the insane asylum.

    Everyone clapped for the policeman.

    參考資料: Self
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